Chaos Raiden
Avid Gamer & Reviewer
Dear staff, can one of you help me edit some stuffs at this thread?
http://devilmaycry.org/community/threads/final-fantasy-xiii-2-review-ps3-xbox-360.10262/
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Can you please remove the squared bracket ( ] ) between the two paragraphs?
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Can you please remove this sentence at the bottom of the first post?
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http://devilmaycry.org/community/threads/final-fantasy-xiii-2-review-ps3-xbox-360.10262/
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Fight monsters to tame/recruit them to your party.
Winning battles may sometime reward you the crystal of a monster. That means you can use it as your third party member in the game. There are many monsters that can be recruited to your party, and there are some that can't be recruited, such as bosses. Unlike Noel and Serah, each monster have only one Paradigm, which is their own limitation. However, leveling them up enough in Crystarium will make them much stronger, making them a powerhouse in their own Paradigm role. You can also adorn your monsters with various things, such as hats, bags, etc.
]Each monster have their own unique skill called Feral Link. Feral Link gauge is charged by attacking enemies, healing, etc. Once it is full, you can activate it and use it to defeat your enemies. During the activation, there are some button inputs in order to increase the effectiveness of the Feral Link attacks. How strong it is will be depending on how fast you input the button commands.
Can you please remove the squared bracket ( ] ) between the two paragraphs?
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Can you please remove this sentence at the bottom of the first post?
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Pretty much a vast improvement that Final Fantasy XIII, but still lacks some punch on storyline and other factors to attract avid Final Fantasy fans to play this game.Conclusively, this game has many improvements that makes this game much better than Final Fantasy XIII. However, it is pretty hard to attract avid Final Fantasy fans to play this game since it is still different than what they played in previous Final Fantasy games, and I think this game is more catered towards to gamers who are not familiar to Final Fantasy series. Personally, I think the gameplay is easy to understand and addicting to play, awesome graphics, excellent characters, great music, and high replay values. Like Final Fantasy XIII, this game deserves a chance, since it has many improvements from the first game despite it's minor setbacks such as unable to change party members, average storyline, and hit or miss soundtrack.
Can you please replace the word in red with 'than'?
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Cons- The storyline is a hit or miss, as time travelling between different timelines can be very confusing and might cause you to unable to follow the game's storyline well.- Time travel elements are not implemented perfectly in the game's storyline.- Battle system might not appeal to certain players for it is very automatic.- Chocolina is annoying with her Chocobo puns and antics.- You can only control either Serah or Noel in this game.- Too easy to RPG veterans.- The Hands of Time minigame can be time-consuming to complete.- Shocking but inconclusive ending.- You only get to play Lightning at the prologue.
Can you add the sentence in red at that part of my review?