What Are You Thinking?

[La Femme Fatale]

so much well again gone into writing and well if all goes good, going to post new 2 part chapter on one of mine fanfics with two parts on one day.

I hope you don't find this rude as it's certainly not intended to be, but I took a look at your story after you posted about it at REN and I think it might be a good idea for you to find someone to read over your work and help fix the errors. I totally understand that English is not your first language and you write better than I can in my second language, but you're probably not getting the feedback you like because the drafts are a bit too difficult to read as they are.

 

[lorddemolatron]

I hope you don't find this rude as it's certainly not intended to be, but I took a look at your story after you posted about it at REN and I think it might be a good idea for you to find someone to read over your work and help fix the errors. I totally understand that English is not your first language and you write better than I can in my second language, but you're probably not getting the feedback you like because the drafts are a bit too difficult to read as they are.

Some of mine Fics are originally written in mine native language and well it allow me for more emotional depth in characters, since it have many words to describe things like that, in English this is cutted and it would force me to get some slightly same meaning words to accomplish same thing so thats not mine fault some times that Im forced to change some of text on translating

 

[La Femme Fatale]

I'm only suggesting that you have a friend help you work out the grammatical and spelling errors in your English fiction. Many authors have someone read and edit their work before going live.

 

[Rebel Dynasty]

I should probably get a start on that next scene...what the hell possessed me to make it so long? ._. Something tells me whole paragraphs will be removed. It has to be extraneous detail. No way all of that is necessary.

+Funny. The number of times I could have gotten rune stones so easily, but didn't feel inclined to do so...and now I kind of want a set.

 

[lorddemolatron]

I'm only suggesting that you have a friend help you work out the grammatical and spelling errors in your English fiction. Many authors have someone read and edit their work before going live.

I know but most funny and sore reason is that all mine friends roll eyes when i mention fanfics or give them to read some parts of mine writing, so well I have no one for now what would help me with the task apparently .

 

[Shadow]

Sleeeeeeepy. Gah, two hours is a long time from now. Maybe I'll try writing.

+ Ellllllliot...your writer requires your assistance...save me.... OTL -is not rescued-

 

[lorddemolatron]

Well slightly sleepy, propably i end posting that two chapters tommorow for one FanFic updates

 

[Rebel Dynasty]

Wow...I'm the only member online. Well, it's happened to a lot of other people, after all. I was beginning to feel left out. :tongue:

+Maybe I'll just curl up with my book and a cup of hot chocolate...

 

[Jak]

@Rebel Dynasty...can we all just take a second to acknowledge this individual's awesometacularnessessess? like, really. you're an amazing human being. and i would love to bake you cookies...sadly my parole officer won't let me go within 30 feet of my kitchen...so...there's that

 

[Shadow]

The problem with planning to bake sweets is not knowing when to bake them. For instance, I could bake them now, but I'll be tempted to eat them all while mum's asleep. Or I could bake them in the morning, but then I'll be in a rush to get them done before anyone comes over. Decisions, decisions.

+ So that staying up to hours thing? Yeah, that didn't happen. On the plus side, I feel really rested now. XD

 

[KRSkull]

CT: Call me crazy but i feel that this is my story minus the whole lost his family and village part.

 

[lorddemolatron]

geez how much in hate deleting annoying spam on mine email service its so borning now for me do thing like that to 15 unwanted and annoying mails lol.

 

[LordOfDarkness]

@lorddemolatron: I feel your pain. I have to delete all of my email junk as well as deleting all spam accounts here. It's a never ending task :thumbsdown:

 

[Shadow]

Teehee, drop bears. :laugh:

+ I feel so hyper that I'm pretty sure I'm about 70% caffeine, atm. Wheeeeee, coffee. :woot:
++ I really need to go do something productive, but procrastinating is when my chair feels the comfiest.

 

[Rebel Dynasty]

@Jak Why, thank you! ^^ Not sure why I'm awesome, but I do like cookies (who doesn't?) Too bad your parole officer stands in the way. Perhaps we can take care of that...

CT: So much for getting a head start on that next scene. ^^; So much work to do today--if only it was just writing. x_x

 

[lorddemolatron]

Time for myself to write something beside again i have so much to do on some chores and well they make me bored , since finally i managed to break writer block finally for myself

 

[Shadow]

Well, I've finally decided I will crochet this morning. And then write. Though I should probably write before I crochet cuz popcorn isn't a crochet-friendly snack. :|

+ Note to self: ask Gran if she has sea salt and then hold blueberry bread hostage until she delivers the salt. -nods- :thumbsup:

 

[KRSkull]

drop bears.

 

[Rebel Dynasty]

As if I got it done, already. That was a long, long freaking scene--but maybe I can go with my original plan, and do the next one later, then. Make it a sort of "double feature" today. ^^

First thing's first, though. I need sustenance. :dead:

 

[The Good Gentleman]

My dad bought a super cheap, crappy Android tablet and watching him attempt to use it has been amusing.

I tried to help, but he's insisting that he's got it.