You claim to be a serious author/reviewer yet it seems like your story belongs in the young adult world of reading. It's fun for a light read but you got some miles to drive before your complex notions are dropped into there. And it makes me think that you are pandering to a fan base full of 12-16 year olds. I haven't read one review of yours that went much outside of "OMG I LOVE IT!"
On a side note, there are a ****-ton of damn near perfect fan-fic stories and they have little to no reviews. What is up with that? Is it lame if the author builds up a story with descriptive words and plot? Is it only interesting if you state two sentences telling of a character's emotion? Does your story only get noticed if the characters boink each other by the 6th chapter? And even mane worse is that your diction and style could be a lot stronger. Yup, pandering to teenagers honey, and yet your review status is through the roof! Yet you have the nerve to sound so mature and evolved when reviewing other people's **** and yet your story is 'meh' at best. Something is missing here...I mean I know people have different tastes, but could it be possible that that many people think your story is a masterpiece without having objections about it? Ah well, I guess so...
P.S. Why is like...so many OC's 5'5 and under, brunette, in high school/starting college, small build with monster curves, completely nice or stonger than the main character, and screws the main star within the first 25-45% of the story?