Another school shooting. When is this BS gonna stop??
Ane people pay all that money to the gym, when all they have to do is ride the bus. XDArgh, I hate busses so stocked full that I have no spot to grab onto. I literally have to tense EVERY muscle in order not to stumble and fall. It's a ****ing workout.
Ane people pay all that money to the gym, when all they have to do is ride the bus. XD
I have a hard time believing not one out of six people had any critique to give. You don't have to be a frigging writer to know there is everything wrong with that sentence structure--and well, pretty much everything but the actual concept. FFS, a casual reader would suffice! Are you all so busy kissing ass and sparing her feelings that you can't be bothered to save her from the sharks she'll have to deal with later on? And let's face it, it's going to happen, and following in its wake will be one of two things:
1) She'll have an emotional breakdown and give it up, because everyone's been pulling their punches to the point that she's bordering on special snowflake status, and thus will think "this needs a complete overhaul=never write again".
OR
2) When she receives genuine feedback--however blunt--her ego will be so inflated that she'll think, "What do they know? These other six people said it was great, so that one person must be wrong/jealous".
In short: I have no respect for her other so-called "friends"--because at least one of them is knowingly bullshitting her. Now it falls to me to be the goddamn heavy, and even if it hurts her feelings, at least she can have no illusions of me being jealous, and with time, will hopefully realize it was for the betterment of her writing.