I was out of the loop on the name of a single enemy. But let's see how unbased my criticism of the story is.
So, as a recap, the demons are evil and secretly control the government, corporations, fast food, and the media. They use the government to impose rules, the media to brainwash people, fast food to keep them fat and dumb, and corporations to keep them wound up in greed, feeding the banks, which demons also own. The protagonists belong to an underground group of rebels who commit minor acts of vandalism and hijack TV broadcasts in an attempt to "wake the sheeple", which never works and is always labeled by the (demon controlled) media as "terrorist attacks and conspiracy theorists"
have I missed anything? Because so far this is sounding so cliche, I would almost call it a parody, except it seems to be taking itself very seriously. Award winning story? Unlikely.
"you are a demon hunter go fight demons in third person!"
anything can sound ridiculous when you're willing to be reductive to that level.