Much better; the scene might not be done, but now that it's in three parts (two of which are nearly equal in length, the other which is short), it shouldn't be as difficult to bridge the areas in-between.
And of course, getting solid advice from a friend (to, "leave it for now, and move on to something else until you can determine how said part affects what follows it") didn't hurt, either.
Sometimes you just need to step back so that you can see the forest for the trees, as it were. ^^
Also: Chapter Fifteen has officially started. :thumbsup: