DmC: Devil May Cry: The Diary of Sparda

[Foxtrot94]

I have played the first game, it was quite good

Oh. I thought you played TW2, since DragonMaster's Sparda design looks a lot like some TW2 guards' armor.

 

[DragonMaster2010]

He reminds as a character from Berserk or The Witcher, you made a good choice

Yeah after I put the picture online and looked at it closely, I just realized "Holy **** he looks like Guts!" lol

I hope you don't mind me saying this, since you personally dislike the game. But I think your Sparda design has a strong facial resemblance to Dante's from DMC4, could just be the facial hair, but that's what I think. Anyway I think they look cool.

I was actually going for nDante's face but the facial hair was just added cause I thought it looked alright. I actually didn't have DMC4 Dante in mind but looking at it now it does sort of have a resemblance.

 

[V's patron]

I read the prologue, its a good start.

 

[aniixo]

Ooh this looks good! Can't wait to read~

 

[DragonMaster2010]

So guys, I'm trying to think; should I go with first person from Sparda's perspective or third person as a narrator?

 

[V's patron]

So guys, I'm trying to think; should I go with first person from Sparda's perspective or third person as a narrator?

depend on how its showed since first person narration fits an actual journal entry while third person is better for showing events.

so maybe switch between either when neccesary.

 

[Innsmouth]

Mayne as a thought you may add first/third person from perspective of another characters appearing in story. Sometimes it helps to flesh out the characters, like King done it in Dark Tower

 

[Chancey289]

You would be cool if I did some art based on your Sparda and Eva designs right? I'm digging those looks.

 

[DragonMaster2010]

You would be cool if I did some art based on your Sparda and Eva designs right? I'm digging those looks.

Sure thing

 

[Jacky]

Oh. I thought you played TW2, since DragonMaster's Sparda design looks a lot like some TW2 guards' armor.

I haven't played TW2 yet, but i have watched a lot of cutscenes and i have seen many images from the game, so i still know what you are talking about

Yeah after I put the picture online and looked at it closely, I just realized "Holy **** he looks like Guts!" lol

Now you need a Femto like villain :lmao

 

[DragonMaster2010]

Now you need a Femto like villain :lmao

I would assume Mundus is out of the question?

 

[TerrorA]

I would assume Mundus is out of the question?

No. How about my Headcanon about the Four Kings sealing Abaddon?

 

[Jacky]

I would assume Mundus is out of the question?

Who knows

 

[DragonMaster2010]

SO chapter 1 might take a little longer to finish. I wouldn't expect anything soon but I'll try hard to update.

 

[Foxtrot94]

Man, take your time. Also because I'm stuck with exams right now, so it's good for me that you publish Chapter 1 later, cause that way I have the time to read the prologue

 

[DragonMaster2010]

Just updated the story on Fanfiction.net for all your viewing pleasures!
enjoy. :wink:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10997213/2/DmC-Devil-May-Cry-The-Diary-of-Sparda

 

[TerrorA]

I do like the BERSERK references

 

[V's patron]

@DragonMaster2010

Nice work. different style and you could see the growth and difference btw this and your other works.

Speaking of Dead Spirits, I think this look might fit your guest character's appearance in DmC

Im quite partial to the middle so you should use that one.

 

[DragonMaster2010]

@DragonMaster2010

Nice work. different style and you could see the growth and difference btw this and your other works.

Speaking of Dead Spirits, I think this look might fit your guest character's appearance in DmC

Im quite partial to the middle so you should use that one.

Actually the guest character was Bayonetta and her look was her look in Bayonetta 2.

 

[DragonMaster2010]

Bad news guys. A new chapter for this story will have to either wait till next week or a little bit after this weekend. I wanna update my other works first.