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LordOfDarkness
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Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
^ You know I love this... I'm glad I cud help you... And I'm always here if you need anymore help
^ You know I love this... I'm glad I cud help you... And I'm always here if you need anymore help
Angelo Credo
Kept you waiting, huh?
Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
Very nice work, strangely kinky relationship between Trish and Dante that frankly I didn't expect, but hey, it's your story and it's a nice idea, plus it's working out well, keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.
+Rep. ^_^
Very nice work, strangely kinky relationship between Trish and Dante that frankly I didn't expect, but hey, it's your story and it's a nice idea, plus it's working out well, keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.
+Rep. ^_^
ManOfMayhem
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Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
Woah its pretty good
Woah its pretty good
Trish67
Bad a$$ Gunslinger
Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
Before I post any more chapters...I just wanted to say that Lord of Darkness has been a huge help to me, while writing these chapters...and just wanted to give some credit...for the fabulously perfect Dante and Vergil lines he's come up with.
here are just a few...he has come up with;
Dante:what the hell, Annie, if it’s my red clothes you don’t like, I could try wearing green or something!
Dante: (on his cell phone to Trish) Hey babe, it's your greatest lover, Dante.
Vergil:I hope this guy knows our sis has four types of protection... The first two types are contraceptive... And the last two are us.
lots of hugs for my online bro.
Before I post any more chapters...I just wanted to say that Lord of Darkness has been a huge help to me, while writing these chapters...and just wanted to give some credit...for the fabulously perfect Dante and Vergil lines he's come up with.
here are just a few...he has come up with;
Dante:what the hell, Annie, if it’s my red clothes you don’t like, I could try wearing green or something!
Dante: (on his cell phone to Trish) Hey babe, it's your greatest lover, Dante.
Vergil:I hope this guy knows our sis has four types of protection... The first two types are contraceptive... And the last two are us.
lots of hugs for my online bro.
Devil Hunter 95
Supreme Trickster
Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
i loved every bit of it!
i loved every bit of it!
Quentarus
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Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
ok i like the idea that u made this up but this is my prospective from the games/anime series
i dont think dante would ever marry trish because it resembles to much of his mother, second they are only parteners not lovers,
and there is no way i can see trish and dante getting to gether because it would be "rewritting history" sense sparda did marry and loved somebody who turned out to be dante sparda and virgil sparda, why i say it would be rewritten is because if that happened a little different from danta and virgil
but thats my opion on this
Trish67;97149 said:
ok i like the idea that u made this up but this is my prospective from the games/anime series
i dont think dante would ever marry trish because it resembles to much of his mother, second they are only parteners not lovers,
and there is no way i can see trish and dante getting to gether because it would be "rewritting history" sense sparda did marry and loved somebody who turned out to be dante sparda and virgil sparda, why i say it would be rewritten is because if that happened a little different from danta and virgil
but thats my opion on this
Devil Hunter 95
Supreme Trickster
Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
uh yeah can we sort of get back to the compliments and not the scientific words please
uh yeah can we sort of get back to the compliments and not the scientific words please
Trish67
Bad a$$ Gunslinger
Re: Chapter 1: Patty visits Devil may cry and learns something shocking!
i lieded guys sorry.... and sorry for double posting...
but here is chapter 6
Four year old, Persephone Rachel Sparda, tossed and turned in her sleep. she woke up, suddenly. Poor Persephone was often plagued by nightmares. Tonight she had a particularly scary one. Persephone decided that the best thing to do was to wake up her Daddy, and go back to sleep in his arms, where she knew she would be save from any scary dreams.
"Daddy!" she called, shaking Vergil
No response.
"Daddy!" she said again.
Vergil was obviously fast asleep.
Persephone crawled up on the big bed, and gently shook her father's redhaired girlfriend, Setesh.
"Setesh."
Setesh woke up.
"Sephy is everything alright?" Setesh asked, rather sleepily.
"yeah."said Persephone. "accept i had a bad dream and i can't wake up Daddy."
"let me try."said setesh. she gentle shook Vergil and like the four year old had no luck.
"watch this." Setesh said to the little girl,with a slight wink.
Setesh ran her hand through her boyfriend's white hair, and gave him a gentle kiss. Vergil opened his eyes..
"It's almost midnight, Tesh. Go back to sleep." said Vergil. He was clearly still half asleep.
"I couldn't sleep, Daddy." said Persephone.
Vergil turned and looked at his daughter. He knew she was often plaqued with Nightmares. He motioned for her to cuddle up beside him. she did so. eventually the three of them fell asleep again.
Vergil and Setesh were woken early the next morning, by loud music coming from Persephone's room.
Im so addicted to the loving that youre feeding to me (ohhh)
Cant do without it, this feelings got me weak in the knees (ohh baby)
Bodys in withdrawal every time you take it away (ohhh)
Cant you hear me callin?
Begging you to come out and play? (awww yeah)
So baby come to me
Baby, show me wh you are (yeah yeah yeah)
Sweet to me
Like sugar to my heart (oooh baby)
Im craving (Im cravin) for you, Im missing you like
Candy (missin you like candy)
Sweet sweet loving got me going to the extreme,
Wont go without it this vibe has gotta hold on me
Satisfying baby let me show what Im made of
No doubt about it, got me feeling crazy cant get enough.
(baby baby baby baby wont you)
"Persephone! Do have we have to listen to Mandy Moore at this ungodly hour of the morning?" Vergil asked his daughhter, yelling over the music.
"Yes, we do Daddy!" Persephone yelled back.
"Okay, fine." said Vergil, once again yelling over the music. "But turn it down a little, ok?"
"Okay." said Persephone, as she turned it down.
"oh f*** it i'm awake now." said Setesh, who obivously had been trying to inorge the Mandy Moore song that had woken her up.
"Yeah. Me too." said Vergil.
They decided to get up and start the day.
Meanwhile back at Devil May Cry....
Dante and Trish were back from their honeymoon in vegas and were still fast asleep.
There we are...chapter 6....chappy 7 coming soon...although i don't know how soon.
i lieded guys sorry.... and sorry for double posting...
but here is chapter 6
Four year old, Persephone Rachel Sparda, tossed and turned in her sleep. she woke up, suddenly. Poor Persephone was often plagued by nightmares. Tonight she had a particularly scary one. Persephone decided that the best thing to do was to wake up her Daddy, and go back to sleep in his arms, where she knew she would be save from any scary dreams.
"Daddy!" she called, shaking Vergil
No response.
"Daddy!" she said again.
Vergil was obviously fast asleep.
Persephone crawled up on the big bed, and gently shook her father's redhaired girlfriend, Setesh.
"Setesh."
Setesh woke up.
"Sephy is everything alright?" Setesh asked, rather sleepily.
"yeah."said Persephone. "accept i had a bad dream and i can't wake up Daddy."
"let me try."said setesh. she gentle shook Vergil and like the four year old had no luck.
"watch this." Setesh said to the little girl,with a slight wink.
Setesh ran her hand through her boyfriend's white hair, and gave him a gentle kiss. Vergil opened his eyes..
"It's almost midnight, Tesh. Go back to sleep." said Vergil. He was clearly still half asleep.
"I couldn't sleep, Daddy." said Persephone.
Vergil turned and looked at his daughter. He knew she was often plaqued with Nightmares. He motioned for her to cuddle up beside him. she did so. eventually the three of them fell asleep again.
Vergil and Setesh were woken early the next morning, by loud music coming from Persephone's room.
Im so addicted to the loving that youre feeding to me (ohhh)
Cant do without it, this feelings got me weak in the knees (ohh baby)
Bodys in withdrawal every time you take it away (ohhh)
Cant you hear me callin?
Begging you to come out and play? (awww yeah)
So baby come to me
Baby, show me wh you are (yeah yeah yeah)
Sweet to me
Like sugar to my heart (oooh baby)
Im craving (Im cravin) for you, Im missing you like
Candy (missin you like candy)
Sweet sweet loving got me going to the extreme,
Wont go without it this vibe has gotta hold on me
Satisfying baby let me show what Im made of
No doubt about it, got me feeling crazy cant get enough.
(baby baby baby baby wont you)
"Persephone! Do have we have to listen to Mandy Moore at this ungodly hour of the morning?" Vergil asked his daughhter, yelling over the music.
"Yes, we do Daddy!" Persephone yelled back.
"Okay, fine." said Vergil, once again yelling over the music. "But turn it down a little, ok?"
"Okay." said Persephone, as she turned it down.
"oh f*** it i'm awake now." said Setesh, who obivously had been trying to inorge the Mandy Moore song that had woken her up.
"Yeah. Me too." said Vergil.
They decided to get up and start the day.
Meanwhile back at Devil May Cry....
Dante and Trish were back from their honeymoon in vegas and were still fast asleep.
There we are...chapter 6....chappy 7 coming soon...although i don't know how soon.
Trish67
Bad a$$ Gunslinger
sorry for double post here is chapter 7
Nero walked up the stairs toward the sixth floor of an apartment buliding.
When he reached the sixth floor he began digging in his pocket for his keys.
He put the key in the door and turned it, and then opened the door.
He entered the apartment that he shared with Kryie. Nero threw his keys down on the coffee table in the living room, before walking into the kitchen and putting his arms around his pretty auburn haired, girlfriend.
"Hi." he said.
"Where were you?" Kryie asked, not turning around, and continuing to do the dishes.
Nero was usually snoozing on the couch when Kryie got home from work. But today he hadn't been home at all. So she tried calling him, when he didn't pick up his cell phone Kryie got worried. When he didn't call back after she had called him five times, she started to get p*ssed.
"You didn't answer your cell phone." she said.
"I was driving." said Nero.
"For three hours? I have been trying to reach you for three hours, Nero."
"No, for two hours. I was in New york city."
New York City was a two hour drive from Fortuna. Kryie didn't have to ask, what Nero had been doing in New York City. She knew, New York, was where Dante lived. Lately Nero had been driving down to New York a lot. Kryie was confused as to why Nero was hanging out with Dante so much. She had gotten the impression that they didn't like each other much.
"Why are you going down there so much? I thought you and Dante hated each other."
"No, we don't hate each other. We never hated each other. We just didn't like each other much."
"Are you becoming friends with him?"
"No, not reallu but, I'm beginning to see a new side of him, that I like a lot."
"He's settled down and gotten married." Nero added at Kryie's confused look.
"Oh what's she like?" asked Kryie. she was sincerly interested in the personality of any woman who could tame Dante or rather make him settle down.
"Her personality?" asked Nero.
"Yes." said Kryie.
"How to describe Trish?" Nero thought out loud as Kryie finshed the previous night's dishes and the couple sat down on the couch.
"well she's a opinonated liberal woman, with a taste for hard ligour."
"hard ligour?" asked Kryie, who had never had a alcholic drink in her life.
"Yeah hard ligour, like gin, vodka, tequlia, or jack daniels straight up." Nero explained.
"You weren't drinking, were you, Nero?" asked Kryie with a concerned look on her face.
"No. I wasn't." said Nero.
"I was worried when you weren't home, when I got home today." said Kryie. "I got a little angry when you didn't call me back. But I understand that you were driving. I'm sorry I got angry,Nero."
"It's okay." said Nero. "You had every right to be angry with me. I should have called you before I left."
"No, you didn't have to do that." said Kryie, playing with her hair.
"Yes, I did." said Nero. "If I had called. You wouldn't have worried and you wouldn't have gotten angry when I didn't answer my phone."
When Kryie didn't say anything and continued to play with her hair. Nero added, "You know I love you, right Kryie?"
"Yeah." she said. "I love you too, Nero."
writing chapter 8 now.
Nero walked up the stairs toward the sixth floor of an apartment buliding.
When he reached the sixth floor he began digging in his pocket for his keys.
He put the key in the door and turned it, and then opened the door.
He entered the apartment that he shared with Kryie. Nero threw his keys down on the coffee table in the living room, before walking into the kitchen and putting his arms around his pretty auburn haired, girlfriend.
"Hi." he said.
"Where were you?" Kryie asked, not turning around, and continuing to do the dishes.
Nero was usually snoozing on the couch when Kryie got home from work. But today he hadn't been home at all. So she tried calling him, when he didn't pick up his cell phone Kryie got worried. When he didn't call back after she had called him five times, she started to get p*ssed.
"You didn't answer your cell phone." she said.
"I was driving." said Nero.
"For three hours? I have been trying to reach you for three hours, Nero."
"No, for two hours. I was in New york city."
New York City was a two hour drive from Fortuna. Kryie didn't have to ask, what Nero had been doing in New York City. She knew, New York, was where Dante lived. Lately Nero had been driving down to New York a lot. Kryie was confused as to why Nero was hanging out with Dante so much. She had gotten the impression that they didn't like each other much.
"Why are you going down there so much? I thought you and Dante hated each other."
"No, we don't hate each other. We never hated each other. We just didn't like each other much."
"Are you becoming friends with him?"
"No, not reallu but, I'm beginning to see a new side of him, that I like a lot."
"He's settled down and gotten married." Nero added at Kryie's confused look.
"Oh what's she like?" asked Kryie. she was sincerly interested in the personality of any woman who could tame Dante or rather make him settle down.
"Her personality?" asked Nero.
"Yes." said Kryie.
"How to describe Trish?" Nero thought out loud as Kryie finshed the previous night's dishes and the couple sat down on the couch.
"well she's a opinonated liberal woman, with a taste for hard ligour."
"hard ligour?" asked Kryie, who had never had a alcholic drink in her life.
"Yeah hard ligour, like gin, vodka, tequlia, or jack daniels straight up." Nero explained.
"You weren't drinking, were you, Nero?" asked Kryie with a concerned look on her face.
"No. I wasn't." said Nero.
"I was worried when you weren't home, when I got home today." said Kryie. "I got a little angry when you didn't call me back. But I understand that you were driving. I'm sorry I got angry,Nero."
"It's okay." said Nero. "You had every right to be angry with me. I should have called you before I left."
"No, you didn't have to do that." said Kryie, playing with her hair.
"Yes, I did." said Nero. "If I had called. You wouldn't have worried and you wouldn't have gotten angry when I didn't answer my phone."
When Kryie didn't say anything and continued to play with her hair. Nero added, "You know I love you, right Kryie?"
"Yeah." she said. "I love you too, Nero."
writing chapter 8 now.
LordOfDarkness
The Dark Avenger © †
Is it me, or does this keep getting better and better? +rep
shadow master
New Member
nice stuff +rep