DMC: All Hell Broken.

[LordOfDarkness]

Just to summarise where this is at.

: Nero still needs to complete his task.

: Advicate needs to be killed.

: Belivious needs to decide what he is going to do.

: The gang have to send the best to fight against Sequari, and Nero needs to return.

: The gang need to enter the upper hell gates and then face Sequari.

: Epilogue.

So there is still loads to come guys

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Chapter 6, pg 5

"Something isn't right, why is it taking this long?" Toni said.

"They are quite a distance away, they were when I lost Noraciss" Keno replied.

Dante looked at Grenal, with a little bit of hatred towards him, as he was a demon.

"So how can you help huh?" Dante asked.

"All I can offer is myself as a warrior" Grenal said, he had no other purpose.

"So, you have no Intel?" Dante replied curiously, "Gathering that you worked for Sequari" he added.

"No, all I can say is that, I think I know why it is taking whoever it is so long to return" Grenal replied, which made Dante a little happier.

"Please, do tell" Dante said.

"Well it may be to do with the gate guarder, a dragon that is linked with the holder of the key" Grenal said, he didn't like the way Dante was looking at him.

"Noraciss right?" Dante said correctly.

"Yes, perhaps Advicate, the dragon, is interfering in some way" Grenal said, he was sure that he was right, but could Dante believe him.

 

[Chaos Raiden]

nice..excellent work,meow...Rep+ meow...

 

[LordOfDarkness]

^ Thanks, rep+ for liking it

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Chapter 6, pg 6

NERO'S TEST

Nero awoke, and picked himself up, only to find that he was shrouded with darkness. He had no idea where he was, and no light, or way out was visible to him.

"Strange, where the hell am I?" Nero asked himself.

But an unsettling voice brought the answer.

"Hello Nero, remember me?" the voice said, and a face came from out of the darkness and stared at him, unforgivably.

"You!!, but, I, I killed you a long time ago" Nero said to the demon.

The demon didn't respond, it only came further into view to reveal more of its kind.

"I killed you once before, I can do it again" Nero said, and he raised both his guns. But Red Tyrant and Blue rose where pulled from Nero's tight grasp, and they were thrown far into the distance.

So Nero raised Red Queen, and tauntingly said, "Let's dance".

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Okay so what does everybody think so far?

More to come on Nero's test

 

[Chaos Raiden]

wonderful,meow...rep+ meow...although i like this fiction more than of all others you have made,but i think the conclusion should be close at hand,meow...anyway,it is your story,meow...

 

[LordOfDarkness]

^ Me too kind of. It's got an awesome storyline if you have read all the way through, which I know you have A.Z.

I just want to know what you think of characters and their attitudes you know?

 

[Chaos Raiden]

^ me too kinda .lol. it's got an awesome storyline if you have read all the way through, which I know you practically have A.Z.

I just want to know what you think of characters and their attitudes y'know?

Excellently suited attitudes with the characters,meow...

 

[LordOfDarkness]

^ Thanks man +rep

 

[Chaos Raiden]

no problem...hope it helps you,meow...

 

[LordOfDarkness]

^ It was a nice thing to say man

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Okay, so should I continue? As I want to know if you peeps want me to go on?

 

[Chaos Raiden]

^i'm the one who should say that about my fan fiction,meow...plz finish this fiction ASAP if possible...

 

[LordOfDarkness]

^ I'll try bro Thanks for reading it man

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Chapter 6, pg 6 continued

All of a sudden, Nero remembered why he was where he was in the first place. The idea that the creatures were an illusion that could strangely inflict damage was a little scary. Nobody could seem to understand the way of the watchers, and certainly not the prophecy that was spoken about so often.

Nero still had Red Queen in his hand, along with his new sword Lucius.

Nero struck the first three demons with Red Queen, but the attack had no effect on them.

"Strange. Well let's see how you favour against this" Nero said, taunting a demon to come closer.

The demon did, and Nero knocked it into the air.

After loads of attacks from Red Queen, Nero was actually getting tired.

"What's wrong with me? Am I weak?" he said to himself. After getting up, the voice of Lucius came into his head.

 

[LordOfDarkness]

What do you guys think so far? Because I know fan fics never really get many comments

I would like to know what peeps think of the characters I have made up, and rate them as you wish out of ten

 

[Chaos Raiden]

Chapter6, pg 6 continued

All of a sudden, Nero remembered why he was where he was in the first place. The idea that the creatures were an illusion that could strangely inflict damage was a little scary. Nobody could seem to understand the way of the watchers, and certainly not the prophecy that was spoken about so often.

Nero still had Red Queen in his hand, along with his new sword Lucius.

Nero struck the first three demons with Red Queen, but the attack had no effect on them.

"Strange. Well let's see how you favour against this" Nero said, taunting a demon to come closer.

The demon did, and Nero knocked it into the air.

After loads of attacks from Red Queen, Nero was actually getting tired.

"What's wrong with me? Am I weak?" he said to himself. After getting up, the voice of Lucius came into his head.

more soon guys

Lovely,meow.rep+ meow...

 

[LordOfDarkness]

^ Well thanks man But what do you think of my characters?

 

[Chaos Raiden]

^ well thanks man but what do you think of my characters?

didn't i told you earlier...? anyway...Stylish characters strikes a 10...meow...