Sonic fanfic (NOT your average carefree sonic fanfic)

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Thanks! Oh, and if you want to know what Metal's voice sounds like in robot form, put your hands over your mouth in a position so that you touch your nose, like this: /^\ Then, speak. It sounds pretty menacing, doesn't it?
 
Here's a couple songs for you.

Theme of Veronica and Metal: Together
http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sega/genesis/Sonic3_IceCapDance_RemixGM.mid

Theme of Metal: Emotion
http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sega/genesis/palace_trouble.mid

Theme of Veronica: Spitfire
http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sega/genesis/LavaReef_Act1_GMv1.mid

Theme of Love: Oasis
http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps2/At_Zanarkand_%28Ameliorated%29.mid

Theme of the Unknown: Tension (By unknown, I mean an important character who will be revealed as the main villain. ;))
http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps2/ffxseymourblackmages.mid

Enjoy!
 
NEW PART! (finally) It's a bit on the short side, but it's supposed to be. I need to get back into the groove of things.

On our way back, a child noticed me. He couldn't have been even eight. He came right up to me with a piece of cheesecake in his hand, then, with his free hand, shook my hand. "Thank you for saving my daddy's farm!" He told me. He held out the cheesecake. "My daddy told me to give this to you. Everyone is scared of you, but me and my daddy aren't. You're a nice man." I didn't know what to say. I took the cake and said, "When you get home to your daddy, tell him that if he has any more trouble, I'll help, okay?" I ruffled the boys hair and he laughed. Then, he nodded and walked off. Veronica laughed as well. "You're very good with kids, aren't you?" My face went red. I didn't want to look like a soft-hearted old man. "Yeah, but you won't see me doing it very often."

When we got back, it was dark. When I flipped the light switch, everyone in town leaped out of the shadows and scared the living bajeezus out of me, making me jump and Veronica yelp. Everyone laughed at our reaction, and then proceeded to thank me for saving the farm. Everyone shook my hand and in my bewilderment, I just sort of... Watched. Then, I fell to my knees, my face wet with tears. Veronica noticed this and knelt down beside me. "Hey, are you okay?"

I looked at her with a big smile. "Are you kidding me? I feel great!" I wiped off my tears of joy and proceeded to walk in the middle of the group of people. "Thank you! Thank you all for coming! I'm glad you can finally see me for who I truly am." That was a lie, but it was best to go with it for now. No sense scaring people when they're just starting to warm up to you. "However, I didn't change on my own. It was Veronica who changed me, and showed me what true happiness is." I held both her hands. "She is my life, my love, and my dreams. I couldn't ask for any more." I looked at the crowd of people. "Today, I hope you've learned that someone isn't measured by what they look like, it's what they do. Now, please, go home and get some rest. It's a bit late." As everyone filed out, I looked at Veronica. "We should get some rest, too." I walked to the couch, but she protested. "You don't need to sleep there anymore." I turned around in surprise. "Where will I sleep? The floor?"

"No, silly, you can sleep with me."

"Uhhhh... Sure, I guess..."

So, we went to bed. Her laying under the covers and me staying above them. We talked. Just idle chitchat. Nothing you'd care about. She fell asleep, and I was left alone with my thoughts. I was finally accepted, I had someone to hold close to my side and love... Everything was perfect. Nothing could be better. I soon fell into a peaceful sleep...

...And awoke to the sounds of gunfire and explosions.
 
DAH!! I was waiting for it in the last paragraph, but then I remembered you said you were going to take it out. Darn it. Can I read the bit you took out? PLZ PLZ PLZ? :D Send it to me via PM, pweeeaaasseee? This is really good stuff DT! :)
 
Veronica was gone from my side, and I could hear the piercing screams of death outside. I quickly got up, put on my clothes and ran outside.

The town was on fire. Soldiers in strange armor ran every which-way, gunning down civilians as if they were animals. When two of them spotted me and pointed their guns, I ran forward and bent the barrels. They both pulled out combat knives, so I hit their hands to make them drop them. One did, the other didn't. I quickly grabbed the fallen knife and stabbed the defenseless one. A short shriek, then nothing. The other lunged at me, swinging like a madman. I deflected all his strikes with my knife and cut his wrist. He held it for a moment, muttered a curse, and ran off. I ran after him, but I lost him in the smoke. Gunfire continued to ring out in different directions, along with screams that were suddenly cut off by death. My heart was racing. It was the first time I'd ever truly experienced fear. I heard marching, and looked behind me. A whole platoon of soldiers was marching right towards me. In my blind fury, I ran straight towards them. That's when they stopped marching and held Veronica forward. I stopped dead in my tracks. One of the soldiers pulled out his knife and brought it to her neck.

"You blink, she dies." He said through his gas mask.

I fell to my knees with my hands behind my head in a gesture of surrender. The soldiers surrounded me and grabbed me by the wrists. They began to march forward, but let go of my body, holding their hands.

"Damn that's hot! What the hell?!"

My body changed back to it's robotic form. I changed both my arms to miniguns and fired into the crowd of soldiers, making sure not to hit Veronica. When all the soldiers were dead, Veronica fell down, unconscious. I ran over to her, but I couldn't move any more. I turned around to see a short, hooded figure with armor walking towards me, with his hand outstreched, holding what looked to be a ball of dark energy.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you."

I recognized the voice immediately. It sent chills down my spine.

"By the decree of Darkrus the emperor, this town is hereby wiped off the map."

"Who the hell is Darkrus?"

The figure pulled his hood down, revealing blue spines and a wicked, lopsided grin along with bright green eyes.

"I am Darkrus, ruler of Dessnia, the nation of gold. This town is mine now, so leave if you don't want to die."

I scoffed. "Your name's not Darkrus. It's Sonic."

He took a step back. "You... You know my real name...? Who are you?"

I took a step forward. "An old enemy. Don't I look familiar?"

He took another step back. "Perhaps. Why don't you enlighten me?" He didn't give me time to answer. He threw the dark energy to the ground, and it turned into a small, flashing box.

"What the hell is that supposed to do?"

"In about ten seconds, you'll find out." With that, he teleported away.

"What the hell did he mean by-"

I was cut off by a series of explosions, each one closer to me. The box he'd left behind was a beacon! There was no hope to escape the blasts. I merely stood and took the blows. Soon, they were over. I tried to get up, but I couldn't. My legs and one of my arms were gone! So was the entire village. However, there was one spot that remained untouched, and that was where Veronica laid. I crawled toward her, determined to spend my last minutes with the one I loved. But HE stood in front of me.

"You don't know when to quit, do you?" He walked over to her and picked her up by the head.

"If you want her, come and get her."

"You bastard!" I turned my remaining arm into a minigun again, but he merely deflected the bullets with his dark magic.

"What a shame. Perhaps I have some use for the two of you, though."

"I'll never serve you."

"You don't have a choice. Serve me, or watch her die. Then die yourself."

Again, I didn't have time to answer. My self-repair systems had been destroyed, and my body went into hibernation mode to recuperate...
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*insert DBZ end of episode song here* The true villain has been revealed. What torture does he have in store for our heroes? Find out in the next part!
 
Hey nice! I laughed when I found out it was Sonic! Of all people, that's just great XD. In an absolutely good way though ;P. Keep this up man.
 
I have no clue how much time had passed. All I know is that it was a very long time. A month or two, I believe. I woke up, feeling cold. My clothes were gone, and a man was welding something next to me. He wore a lab smock with a blue shirt underneath. I turned my head and he gasped. He spoke in English, but his voice was heavy with a Russian accent.

"You're awake! Master Darkrus will be most pleased! Now, just let me finish welding this and... Done. Be back in a bit. Don't go anywhere! Mweeheeheehee!"

I scoffed. Not like he heard it, but it made me feel a bit better. I took a look around. It looked like a sterile room, but it was made out of a dark stone. Obsidian, maybe. I tried to get up, but I couldn't. No wonder that crazy kook was laughing. I was tied down. I merely pulled harder and the shackles broke like wet tissue paper. That's when I noticed my arm and leg were different. I reached with my normal arm and touched the strange arm, feeling cold metal touch back. They were cybernetic prostheses. I had lost my arm and legs... Great. The doctor came back, not surprised in the least that I'd broken free.

"I had a feeling you'd do that. Your file states you're rather... Fiery tempered. Maybe I shouldn't have tied you down in the first place, hm?"

"Enough banter. Who are you?"

He took a deep bow.

"I am professor Papradov, but you can call me Sasha."

I snickered.

"What's so funny?!" He proclaimed.

"Your name... It's a GIRL'S name!"

His look of exasperation turned to one of deep anger.

"You're making a fool of the one who saved your life! Be a bit more grateful, eh?"

I stopped snickering.

"I suppose you're right. Now, why am I here?"

"You're here to serve Darkrus the Eternal. I thought you knew that already."

"Feh. What am I supposed to do? Kiss his feet?"

"Wrong!" He said as he pointed a finger skyward. "You are to train his troops... And he said you can see your beloved!" He said in a sing-song voice.

"Veronica?! Where is she? I swear to God if you hurt her..."

He held up a warning hand. "Relax. She's fine. She's in her quarters right now... Turns out she can be a VERY good fighter when motivated. Heeheeheehee."

"You make me sick. Take me to her."

"Alright, fine, but only for a little while."

He led me out of the room. My cybernetic legs were asymmetrical, one was booted, the other had a clawed foot. It created a distinct sound as I walked with Papradov. Thunk, clank, thunk, clank. I had grown weary of the sound by the time I'd reached Veronica's room. Papradov produced a key from his pocket and opened the door, mocking a gentlemanly pose as the door opened. He walked away without another word. I walked inside the room, startled by how luxurious it was. Silk cushions and curtains, cherrywood furniture, and a huge vanity mirror. However, I didn't get to admire it long, because Veronica was already in my face, not looking at me, but pointing a sword at my neck!

"What do you want?" She said in a cold voice.

"Guh... Veronica! It's me!"

She withdrew the sword. "Metal? Is that you? Where have you been, cold storage?"

I looked down. "Probably... Look at what they did to me! This is inhumane..."

She looked at my cybernetic limbs. Her eyes became misty, and she dug her face into my chest. "I'm so scared. What are we going to do? We can't even leave this city..."

I stroked her hair. "It'll be fine. We'll make it through. I promise..."
 
A bit of art... Well, not exactly art that I drew, but art nonetheless.

Metal: Post Dismemberment
ASADAE___Metal_Sonic.jpg


Darkrus the Eternal: the False Hero, Sonic
The_Dark_One__Inked_Out.jpg


Veronica: The Endgame Lover
Sonya_The_Victim_Of_A_Sickness.jpg


Professor Sasha Papradov: Master of the Mechanical
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The Soldiers: Mass Produced Mayhem Lovers
from left to right: Normal Male Soldier, Commander, and Female Sniper.
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Isn't it funny how easily a writer can make you hate a character.
At the moment... I hate Sonic
(plus I only have to think about the last Sonic game on xbox 360 to make me hate him even more!! Gah! That was terrible!!).

BlueDevil almost had me crying with the ending of his story, I really would like a happy one on this, I don't think i could stand to see Metal lose Veronica... :(