Here's the second chapter for Deception
Chapter 2
The prisoner sat huddled in one of the corners of his cell as he watched his partner get his thumbs cut off. He could hear the muffled screams. Zu’Coni remained completely passive as she decapitated the criminal with her knife. It was still late at night. Rain had started to fall as she led the prisoners back to Belain. After finishing she threw the man back in his cell and was about to grab the other prisoner when there was a knock on the door. The lieutenant closed the door to the cell and locked it. She turned to face the front door right as someone walked in. It was Maria. Zu’Coni glared at her and stepped in front of the man with no thumbs to block him from view. Maria had already caught a glimpse and asked, “What are you doing?”
Zu’Coni ignored the question and asked her own. “What are you doing here?” She continued to glare at the intruder. Maria sighed. “I was out for a walk and thought I’d stop by.”
“In the rain?”
“I couldn’t sleep.”
“By yourself?”
“I wasn’t out for that long.”
“At night.”
“Come on, Mom!”
Zu’Coni pushed her out the door. “I’m taking you home.”
Maria tried to free herself, but couldn’t. Strong grip is common among scormada. “Let me go!” she pleaded.
The scormada looked at Maria with disgust. “There is no reason why you should be wandering around alone at night. There are even less reasons to why you should be spying on me.”
“I wasn’t. I swear.”
“Vanue damn you, you were!” Zu’Coni hissed. Maria was caught of guard. She never heard Zu’Coni angry before. She was always very calm.
“I’m sorry!” the girl cried. “Its just I never see you and I thought you were lonely and I couldn’t sleep so-“
“Be silent! I have a job to do. All you do is get in the way.” They arrived at Maria’s house. Zu’Coni shoved her onto the porch. She started walking away, but then turned back and said. “And tell Derik to mind his own business!” She then stormed off before Maria could ask how she knew. Derik opened the door and Maria went in with her head down.
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Derik Provic was always known for being a man of honor and loyalty. He was loved amongst the townspeople so much he was forced into being the mayor’s assistant and council member. He was an older man, but still had the strength of someone much younger. The wrinkles around his eyes were the only indication of weakness. He had lived in Belain his whole life and loved it dearly, which is why he was ashamed to see it falling apart.
He walked slowly to Zu’Coni’s house early in the morning. He was hoping to catch her before she went to bed. He brushed his dark hair out of his eyes and knocked on the door. Zu’Coni answered and was about to close the door again when Derik pushed his way through. Zu’Coni took a step back to make room. She folded her arms and said quietly, “I apologize if I’ve done anything to upset you, but you must understand my loyalty does not waver.”
Derik took a deep breath. “I’m sorry for what happened last night, but I need to know where you stand.”
“You should know by now.” She whispered as she redirected her gaze to the floor.
“I know that now. I’m sorry, but I had to know for sure that if you saw an opportunity to well, you know, that you wouldn’t take it.”
Their eyes met as she said coldly, “You humans lack unity. You fight amongst yourselves and project your faults onto other races. I follow what my father taught me, as I’ve always done.”
Derik sighed. “I’m sorry. I really am.”
“Is that all you wanted to say to me?”
“Maria’s sorry to.”
The scormada nodded, but didn’t respond. Derik assumed the conversation was over and left. He went back home and found Maria in the kitchen making her breakfast. She yawned and waved to her father. Derik sat done at the table and rubbed his temple. “You should talk to her.”
Maria stopped what she was doing and without facing Derik said, “I’d rather not.”
“I think it would be a good idea.”
“Dad. Last night was really awkward. I just want to forget about it, and she doesn’t like to let stuff go. I’ll talk to her in a few days or something.”
Derik gave a heavy sigh. “Okay. I just think it would be really beneficial if you made it up to her. You don’t even have to say anything about last night. All you have to do is be her friend.”
Maria was half out the door by the time he finished. She came back in when she heard the last part. “Dad, I don’t think she likes me very much.”
Derik rubbed his temple again. “You’re blind.”
“Thanks.” She replied flatly as she left.
Maria went to the Square to hear the news of the day. The announcer explained that two men were arrested and punished for attempted law breaking. Maria didn’t know that deserved to be punished. The other announcements were boring as usual. She left and went to the market. The peddler, Thomas, had set up and was advertising his goods when Maria walked up to his display. Thomas stopped and stared at her for a few moments. People started giving him odd looks. He shook his head and continued. Maria continued to look at him with eyes wide in confusion. A hand touched her shoulder and she turned. Zu’Coni pulled her away from the crowd. She let go of her arm when they were alone, but continued walking. It finally dawned on Maria what time it was. “What are you doing up?”
“That’s none of your concern.”
“Well what do you want.”
“I don’t want you to go near that man.”
“The peddler?”
“Yes.”
“Why not?”
“I don’t like him.” She said and immediately sped ahead of Maria, ending the discussion. Maria stood staring at her even more confused than before.
Chapter 2
The prisoner sat huddled in one of the corners of his cell as he watched his partner get his thumbs cut off. He could hear the muffled screams. Zu’Coni remained completely passive as she decapitated the criminal with her knife. It was still late at night. Rain had started to fall as she led the prisoners back to Belain. After finishing she threw the man back in his cell and was about to grab the other prisoner when there was a knock on the door. The lieutenant closed the door to the cell and locked it. She turned to face the front door right as someone walked in. It was Maria. Zu’Coni glared at her and stepped in front of the man with no thumbs to block him from view. Maria had already caught a glimpse and asked, “What are you doing?”
Zu’Coni ignored the question and asked her own. “What are you doing here?” She continued to glare at the intruder. Maria sighed. “I was out for a walk and thought I’d stop by.”
“In the rain?”
“I couldn’t sleep.”
“By yourself?”
“I wasn’t out for that long.”
“At night.”
“Come on, Mom!”
Zu’Coni pushed her out the door. “I’m taking you home.”
Maria tried to free herself, but couldn’t. Strong grip is common among scormada. “Let me go!” she pleaded.
The scormada looked at Maria with disgust. “There is no reason why you should be wandering around alone at night. There are even less reasons to why you should be spying on me.”
“I wasn’t. I swear.”
“Vanue damn you, you were!” Zu’Coni hissed. Maria was caught of guard. She never heard Zu’Coni angry before. She was always very calm.
“I’m sorry!” the girl cried. “Its just I never see you and I thought you were lonely and I couldn’t sleep so-“
“Be silent! I have a job to do. All you do is get in the way.” They arrived at Maria’s house. Zu’Coni shoved her onto the porch. She started walking away, but then turned back and said. “And tell Derik to mind his own business!” She then stormed off before Maria could ask how she knew. Derik opened the door and Maria went in with her head down.
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Derik Provic was always known for being a man of honor and loyalty. He was loved amongst the townspeople so much he was forced into being the mayor’s assistant and council member. He was an older man, but still had the strength of someone much younger. The wrinkles around his eyes were the only indication of weakness. He had lived in Belain his whole life and loved it dearly, which is why he was ashamed to see it falling apart.
He walked slowly to Zu’Coni’s house early in the morning. He was hoping to catch her before she went to bed. He brushed his dark hair out of his eyes and knocked on the door. Zu’Coni answered and was about to close the door again when Derik pushed his way through. Zu’Coni took a step back to make room. She folded her arms and said quietly, “I apologize if I’ve done anything to upset you, but you must understand my loyalty does not waver.”
Derik took a deep breath. “I’m sorry for what happened last night, but I need to know where you stand.”
“You should know by now.” She whispered as she redirected her gaze to the floor.
“I know that now. I’m sorry, but I had to know for sure that if you saw an opportunity to well, you know, that you wouldn’t take it.”
Their eyes met as she said coldly, “You humans lack unity. You fight amongst yourselves and project your faults onto other races. I follow what my father taught me, as I’ve always done.”
Derik sighed. “I’m sorry. I really am.”
“Is that all you wanted to say to me?”
“Maria’s sorry to.”
The scormada nodded, but didn’t respond. Derik assumed the conversation was over and left. He went back home and found Maria in the kitchen making her breakfast. She yawned and waved to her father. Derik sat done at the table and rubbed his temple. “You should talk to her.”
Maria stopped what she was doing and without facing Derik said, “I’d rather not.”
“I think it would be a good idea.”
“Dad. Last night was really awkward. I just want to forget about it, and she doesn’t like to let stuff go. I’ll talk to her in a few days or something.”
Derik gave a heavy sigh. “Okay. I just think it would be really beneficial if you made it up to her. You don’t even have to say anything about last night. All you have to do is be her friend.”
Maria was half out the door by the time he finished. She came back in when she heard the last part. “Dad, I don’t think she likes me very much.”
Derik rubbed his temple again. “You’re blind.”
“Thanks.” She replied flatly as she left.
Maria went to the Square to hear the news of the day. The announcer explained that two men were arrested and punished for attempted law breaking. Maria didn’t know that deserved to be punished. The other announcements were boring as usual. She left and went to the market. The peddler, Thomas, had set up and was advertising his goods when Maria walked up to his display. Thomas stopped and stared at her for a few moments. People started giving him odd looks. He shook his head and continued. Maria continued to look at him with eyes wide in confusion. A hand touched her shoulder and she turned. Zu’Coni pulled her away from the crowd. She let go of her arm when they were alone, but continued walking. It finally dawned on Maria what time it was. “What are you doing up?”
“That’s none of your concern.”
“Well what do you want.”
“I don’t want you to go near that man.”
“The peddler?”
“Yes.”
“Why not?”
“I don’t like him.” She said and immediately sped ahead of Maria, ending the discussion. Maria stood staring at her even more confused than before.