Well...I think you need to reveal things slowly. The reader finds out everything right away. Don't say anything about LOW right away. Start with Nic, show how he's such a cool guy. Like start the story off with him at school or something.
Oooh! Ok well I think I'd be more help to you as a beta reader. I can't just tell people how to write or what to say, but if you send me what you've written I can help you.
yea i have a game idea i put in the forum and DTs gonna help with storyline/missions i looked for you and TCD it said you were online but DT said you 2 were asleep
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