CodeBreaker_Kiwi

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My god! *screams in terror*

I think I remember Marisa saying you got a bigger pool than her. ^_^

Yeah, I think so. XD

So MR.Savior, anything fun happened lately?

HELL YEAH!
Who are we gonna kill *Evily Smirks*

Uhhh Okay
Hey dude whatchu want

Where? Where is the savior? *looks around*

What have you been up to?

I'm greater than great, the usual. ^_^

How about you? How are ya?

But I don't like the scouts. <.<

Ok. And it might help you to write better if you start with simple stuff like when you are on the forums. Use proper punctuation and grammar. Seperate different sentences. Stuff like that. That is the first step for anyone. If you notice, I use proper grammar and punctuation alot. It helps me write if I automatically use proper grammar and punctuation. Also try to make sure you spell words correctly. If you are not sure how to spell it, look it up in a dictionary. If you have mistakes in your writing, it makes it hard to read, because many people see those mistakes, and it makes it hard to read, so they don't like it. Also, I got to go. I may be on later today, but I don't know. I will definately be on tommorow though, so see you then.

Writing comics isn't the same as stories. Comics have pictures for detailed backgrounds. What you need to do is learn to be descriptive. And if you don't know what to say next, just stop. Don't force it to come out. Let it come out on it's own.

Ik. Try to do it like you are writing a story. You read things all the time. They have details and dialog. They normally use complete sentences and there is proper grammar, unless the character who talks doesn't use proper grammar, so his dialog wouln't be proper.

It probably will be long and interesting. But I will have to work harder on this one. Have you seen how you RP? I am sorry, but it is pretty terrible. Barely detailed. Mostly talk.

NOw do you understand about how we will write ours?

Ok... Well then, Enjoy.

Cool. How did you like it? Sorry for the late reply. Had to take care of the kids.

Sweet! Since I don't have the cash to get some real equipment, I use IMPROVISATION. That means I'm a badge collector by nature. ^_^

im gonna go now, gotta watch paul blart mall cop
bye*hugglez*

joke? i don't get it, and nope theres none of him

it won't show up

rabbits, you mean?