Recent content by Brunette Keeper [Jess]

My head hurts. And I going through Google Translate and cross-referencing with a Japanese dictionary. Want to know what I hate most of all right now? THESE BUGS! D<

Yeah, it was a compliment. *nod* Well, basically I think flashbacks for: when they first met POSSIBLY the first dream And maybe a flashback for when DT first showed a friend his true self. At appropriate times, flashbacks can work. *nod* A prologue describing the previous Lord of Weapons...

Chapter Two: The dream sequence seems a little over-worded, especially with combinations like "sibilant hissing" ("sibilant" is defined by Dictionary.com as "hissing") and "ichorous blood" ("ichor" is defined by Wikipedia as the "ethereal fluid that is the Greek gods' blood"). The style...

Please stop stealing images that aren't yours. >_< Seriously, when I can recognize images from Castle Age and DragonFable, that's when you know you've failed. At least attempt to draw things yourself, for Christ's sake.

YOU LIE! That Lulzshipping fic was off to a great start! D: We're already in a dark place. XD Can't get much worse.

Ohnoes! D: Haven't we been in worse? <_<;

NOWAI! Writing a fanfic, because I have writer's block on my original fics. ._.;;;; + I nearly wrote "fanfuc". ._.;

Nah. Like I said, it's cool. ^_^ CT: Going through this Twific is making my mind cry out for mercy.

It's cool. ^_^ I probably should've told you that I'd read it (and warned you about my critiquing habits).

O_O Whoa. All of this because of a black locker? CT: Well, the drawing is somewhat good, considering my awful drawing skills...but I dun wanna clean off my desk right now. ;_;

...and that's as far as I can go without tearing the entire fic apart. I don't care if they cry that I'm being mean, that's just not a good fic. I've seen better on FF.net. :|

Well, it's actually kind of decent, but there should be improvements to be made on it. 1. Okay, I know you want your characters to be powerful and all, but in the first part of the first chapter, I'm already seeing pre-power Gary Stu-ism. The black locker immediately screams to me...

ORLY? And I've been trying, but I prefer /ts/. ._.; I've been trying to go on DA more often, but that's more on the first few of my list since I have friends there and fics to work on. ._.;

8D Nothing much, just saw you on and wanted to chat again. <3 How's everything on your end?

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