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Read and Review Request Thread

Meg

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Do you have a story that has been buried underneath the mountains of other stories? Would you like someone to read that story? Well then this thread is for you!

Just fill out this here application!

Title:
Fandom/Original Work:
Description:
Link:
Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit):

Doesn't have to be on here. If you've posted something on FF.net, or some other site then feel free to make use of this thread to! :D Also, please do not use this thread for reviews or concrit giving. Please keep that to the respected story's thread/site/PMs or VMs.

Here's an example;

Title: Death of a Devil
Fandom: Devil May Cry
Description: Dante has been having strange dreams about the death of his mother, but are they only dreams?
Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=21192
Requested Feedback: Concrit, though general reviews are welcome. :)
 
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Chaos Raiden

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Good thread. Rep+. :D

I have two fan fictions buried deep, but I am not particularly looking anyone to read mine, as one is a Kingdom Hearts fanfiction and a DMC crossover with Resident Evil. :lol:
 
DreadnoughtDT

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Rep. +. Now we don't need to make a whole freaking new thread. Thanks, Meg.

Why didn't I think of this earlier?

Can someone sticky this, please? Or move it to the fanfic section, then sticky?
 
LordOfDarkness

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A very useful and helpful Thread. Usually useful and helpful Threads are the ones to be stickied, but we are not to say lol

+ Rep to you nonetheless ^_^
 
Crimson Chaos

Crimson Chaos

chaos breeds within
Title:crimson feather Fandom/Original Work:cross between fan fic and original work Description:story of a god who is given the task to enlist and fight alongside the greatest demon hunter of them all... dante. their mission? end the demon war. Link:http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=19841 Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): review and concrit. side comments and ideas welcome. it is being co-authored by storm silves.
ps. awsome thread meg, thanks. lol also myself and lord of darkness are reviving origions of nero. more info to come later
 
Crimson Chaos

Crimson Chaos

chaos breeds within
Dragon King;297357 said:
I got one:

Title: Devil May Cry: Darkness Falls
Fandom: Devil May Cry
Description: The Darkness returns to reak havoc on the human world and it's up to Dante, Trish, Lady and Nero to stop it.
Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=20182
Requested Feedback: Critiquing, General review

I don't continue works that no one seems interested in.
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i'll check it out tomorrow. i'm the same way. i don't even wanna do anymore on crimson feather until someone reads what little i have. lol
 
LordOfDarkness

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Title: Devil may Cry - Hell's Angels - DMC 5, Concept Idea.

Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry.

Description: Dante is now training Nero after the events that took place in Fortuna. They're following a trace of Dante clones in a City called Fallen Grace, until they get trapped inside Limbo City.

Link: Devil may Cry - Hell's Angels - DMC 5, Concept Idea.

Requested Feedback: Read and review. Helpful criticism also welcome.
 
Dante's Stalker

Dante's Stalker

"Outrun this!"
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Title: Chronicles of the Damned (was originally I Hate Everything About You)
Fandom: Devil May Cry, AU
Description: Cora and Dante are neighbours who, due to unfortunate events, are stuck together for the duration of their young lives. They become fond of each other but there's trouble looming on the horizon - Cora is slowly transforming into a demon, and Dante hunts demons. Having his brother, Vergil, taking an odd interest in Cora does not help the issue at hand.
Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?p=301267#post301267
Requested Feedback (Concrit): PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!

I'm rewriting this fic, and I need all the help I can get to pick up on characterisation flaws, grammar faults, spelling errors, and areas that either don't make sense or don't progress the plot/doesn't aid in character development/ has no purpose but to fill blank space.

Please don't think I don't need your opinion, however minor, or if you pick up on so many errors that you start to feel you can't possibly name them to me, PLEASE DO! I don't want reviews, I need help with this. So, please help me out? @_@
 
Meg

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Because FF.net is a crap shoot if you want concrit;

Title: The Seventh Eidolon
Fandom: Final Fantasy XIII
Description: The war against PSICOM and the Sanctum has spilled over into civilian life. After Bodhum gets attacked Lightning swears revenge on the only one that can being responsible for the attack as well as the entire war. The Fal'cie. Post game.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6221763/1/The_Seventh_Eidolon
Feedback: Concrit, (copying MV because that's how I feel) PLEEEEEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!! I really really need concrit here! This story is my pride and joy! My Declaration of Ownership. My middle finger up Square Enix's massive fail of a butt! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!! Let me know of any grammar or spelling errors. Any thoughts on the characters, dialogue, plot, progression. ANYTHING! I'll be rewording some stuff that has already jumped out at me shortly, but PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE help. Pleash? :oops:
 
Shadow

Shadow

the horror was for love
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Title: Darlin'
Fandom/Original Work: Original Poetry
Description: ...
Link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2920963/1/Darlin
Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): Concrit, please? ^^ *gives puppy dog eyes*
(I'd not be adverse to anyone going through all my fics and concriting them, though. ^^; *accepts anon reveiws on the site*)
 
LordOfDarkness

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I have two 'read and review' requests.

Title: Devil may Cry 5 - Hell's Angels.

Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry.

Description: Dante is now training Nero after the events that took place in Fortuna. They're following a trace of Dante clones in a City called Fallen Grace, until they get trapped inside Limbo City.

Link: Devil may Cry - Hell's Angels

Requested Feedback: Read and review. Helpful criticism also welcome.

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Title: The Man In Red.

Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry.

Description: Dante during his 'Tony Redgrave' years. We see what he got up to whilst living out this alias of his.

Link: [url=http://forums.devilmaycry.org/threads/the-man-in-red.9568/]The Man In Red[/URL]

Requested Feedback: Read and review. Helpful criticism also welcome.
 
Dante's Stalker

Dante's Stalker

"Outrun this!"
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Title: With Love From Hell (inspired by With Love From Paris. I <3 Bruce Willis)
Fandom: DMC
Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/threads/with-love-from-hell-take2.9704/
Description: Don't be fooled. NOTHING is what it seems. And yes, I'm just saying that to throw you off.
Concrit: None please. I've revised this baby like four hundred times already, and it's still faulty. I know where the faults are. Concrit is not necessary. Reviews, on the other hand, I welcome with hugs and cookies.
 
Shadow

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Title: A Marriage of Inconvenience
Fandom/Original Work: Fable
Description: A deal between Sparrow and one of the Heroes goes awry when Logan decides to impliment it years later, forcing his sister into an arranged marriage. And, with the fate of a war in her hands, you can bet she's not going to take it lying down.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9213811/1/A-Marriage-of-Inconvenience
Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): No concrit, please. I've edited this thing so many times, it's making my head spin. I just want someone to give me their opinion on the story and follow along as I update (because people keep telling me it's good, but no one's reviewing it :/ ).

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Title: Old Soul
Fandom/Original Work: Original (YA Supernatural)
Description: As a teenager, Adele Bodine thought she was like all the other moody and introverted art students in her school. Until a new student, and possibly old love, reawakens her gift. But when you're 17 and receiving visions of the future who'd really believe you?
Link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2720334/1/Old-Soul
Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): Have your way with it. Tell me what's bad, please, and tell me if anything of this mess is worth salvaging.
 
Meg

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Shadow said:
Title: Old Soul
Fandom/Original Work: Original (YA Supernatural)
Description: As a teenager, Adele Bodine thought she was like all the other moody and introverted art students in her school. Until a new student, and possibly old love, reawakens her gift. But when you're 17 and receiving visions of the future who'd really believe you?
Link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2720334/1/Old-Soul
Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): Have your way with it. Tell me what's bad, please, and tell me if anything of this mess is worth salvaging.
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*raises hand* I want to read through this. :) I don't have a ton of time at the moment, but if you are willing to wait a few days to a week I can read it then. @.@
 
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