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Eric

Great Demon King of Evil
The Chronicles of Hiyokuna Tochi. (under construction)

Notice:
I am planning on moving this to a new thread titled The Chronicles of Hiyokuna Tochi.
Edits made on 5/1/2012.

Notes:
Tierra de la Prosperidad - Land of Prosperity

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Characters: (under construction)
Bolgera.
Orochimaru.
Valgar.
Zenu.
Zephre.
Zinu.

The Fifteen Archangels:
Asmoradeus.
Ba'al Zebul.
Behema.
Belphra.
Gabriel.
Levia.
Lucifer.
Mammla.
Metatron.
Michael.
Raguel.
Remiel.
Raphael.
Saragael.
Uriel.

The Gods & Goddesses:
Andusk, The God of Light.
Hadrese, The God of Evil.
The Creator, The Goddess of Time.
The Destroyer, The God of Chaos.
The Goddess of Earth & Fire. (needs name)
The Goddess of Water & Ice. (needs name)
The Goddess of Wind & Thunder. (needs name)
The Origin.
Zephrese, The God of Darkness.

The Guardians of The Neverworld:
Chimera.
Cerberus.
The Grim Reaper - Metatron.
Hydra.

The Raptorian Generals:
Abigail, King of The Raptorians.
Poltergeis, Prince of The Raptorians.

The Seven Princes of Hell:
Asmodeus - Asmoradeus.
Beelzebub - Ba'al Zebul.
Behemoth - Behema.
Belphegor - Belphra.
Leviathan - Levia.
Satan - Lucifer.
Mammon - Mammla.

The Seven Sins: (all need true names)
Envy.
Gluttony.
Greed.
Lust.
Pride.
Sloth.
Wrath.

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Races: (under construction) (other races coming soon)

Angels:
A near immortal race of humanoids with wings that live in Heaven and serve Andusk.

Demons:
A race of beast that live in Hell and serve Hadrese.
-Demons = A race of foul beast that were born and live in Hell. They can often leave Hell in spirit form to possess small animals.
-Devils = A stronger variety of Demons that are often bigger and more human-like and can usually possess bigger animals and sometimes even humans. Like normal Demons, they are born in Hell.
-Fallen Angels = The strongest variety of Demons. They were once Angels in Heaven before they betrayed Andusk and served Zephrese during the war in Heaven. They are the most human-like of the Demon race. Incubus and Succubus are the most common varieties.

Draconians:
A race of magical Dragons. They are the first civilized mortal race on Earth and the most intelligent. They are also the most powerful in terms of magic of the mortal races.
They can also take on human forms. They can live to be 2000 years old, sometimes even older.

Dragons:
A race of flying reptiles that can breathe either fire, ice, lightning, or poison. They also have very short lives. Sometimes however, on rare occasions, they may be able to understand or even speak Human tongue and even take on Human forms. This is usually only for the kind hearted though.

Elvenar:
The first fully Human mortal race. They are magic like the Draconians, but are not quite as powerful when it comes to magic.
-Elven = They are human sized and the more magical of the two Elvenar species. They can also live to be around 200.
-Elfs = More around the size of a child. They can can live to be around 400.

Goblins:
A race of evil human-like creatures that often cause trouble for other races. They are considered the main foe of the Elven.
-Giants = The largest and dumbest species of Goblins. They are very rare and they are very powerful.
-Gnomes = The smallest species of Goblin. They often steal things from people to make them angry.
-Goblins = The main and most common species of Goblin. They play pranks on people just for the fun of it.
-Orcs = The most vicious species of Goblin. They make up most of the army of Valgar, the rest being Ogres, Trolls, and Giants.
-Ogres = A large species of Goblin. They inhabit forest as well as caves.
-Trolls = A very large species of Goblin. They are know to inhabit caves and under bridges. They are the main bulk of Valgar's army.

Humans:
Decended from Elven that were very weak with magic. This race has very little if any magical power. However they are often thought to have the most spiritual power.
They are also very well know for being blacksmiths and for creating strange machines.

Raptorians:
A race of greedy Humans that had stolen a sacred object and it turned them into lizard-like men.

Slothrians:
A race of sloth like creatures that have the ability of speech and learning. They only come up to a person's knee or elbow, but they are said to have once been much bigger. They are also believed to have made the first machines long ago.

Tyranians:
A hybrid race of either Draconian and Human blood or Draconian and Elven blood. This race is very rare, but are said to be the most powerful spiritually and magicaly. When they mate, there child will never be another Tyranian even if there mate is also Tyranian. The reason behind this is unkown, but it makes the race that much more rare.

Other Races: (all of these except Vampires need names)
There are a few other races including Vampires, Werewolves, human-like cat race, human-like hyena race and a extraterrestrial turtle race.

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Elements:
Chaos.
Darkness.
Earth.
Fire.
Ice.
Light.
Thunder.
Time.
Water.
Wind.

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Story: (Under construction)

Creation:
Long ago before our world existed....
There was nothing but darkness and a endless abyss, but in this darkness existed a light.
This light shined bright one day and cast out the darkness.
Then the light split into Five Stars and these five were given Five Labors to complete and so they began shaping our world and all others.
First came the land, then the sea, and finally the sky.
Now only two labors remained.
A place was created for the dead to travel after death.
The final star created all living things that would obey the laws of nature and live upon the world that the five stars had created.
With that all Five Labors were complete and the stars departed for Heaven, their birthplace to watch over our world.
This is the story of are creation.
But this is more then just a story.... much more.


Preview #1:
Zephrese is one of the five gods that shaped the universe and they are all children of The Creator, The Goddess of Time that gave birth to Time by defeating The Destroyer, The God of Chaos. Zephrese gave birth to the element of Darkness and created the night and the Moon to govern it. He also created The Underworld, the place where all souls go, and death itself. Zephrese was the most loving of the gods, loving all mortal and immortal beings weather they be man or beast. He was also the most sexual of the gods, often having several Angels that acted as his brides (some male and some female), though none of them, save for one, did he actually have a child with. The Destoyer eventually appeared in the form of their mother and made Andusk (Zephrese's brother and The God of Light) believe that Zephrese was going to try to take all of Heaven for himself (at the time all five gods ruled over Heaven equely), so he forced Zephrese to live in The Underworld to be feared and hated, while Andusk basked in the love of the immortals and mortals. Zephrese was then tricked in a simialar way by The Destroyer into thinking that his brother wanted to be in complete control and both him and Andusk were told by The Destroyer that a war would soon come to Heaven. Andusk then created The Sword of Light, while Zephrese created The Trident of Darkness. Zephrese eventually led a rebellion of Angels against Andusk's Angles after hearing that his wife that had given him a child was executed and that his son was imprisoned and it brought a great war and even affected the mortal world. Zephrese was eventually defeated and then thrown to the earth where he hit the ground and created a great mountain. Andusk ripped pieces of Heaven out and threw them at Zephrese, sealling him in another world and his followers were thrown in with him. Andusk was very weak after this and could never leave Heaven again and he sent his three sisters to watch over the mortal world and protect them for him. Zephrese eventually became so consumed by his anger and despair that he slept and a new being awoke in his body and took over. This was Hadrese. Hadrese transformed into a monsterus creature and all of his followers turned into Demons and their prison turned into Hell, a chaotic realm of Darkness. Hadrese caused many wars amongst the mortal races for thousands of years under the nose of Andusk, until a brave Draconian warrior prince found out that he was trying to escape and sealed him back away. This entire period is known as The Age of War.
 

Eric

Great Demon King of Evil
I can't wait, sounds rather interesting ^^
I just want to let it be knowed that this is really just the set up and a preview of the story.
If that is disappointing, i apologize.
But it is really hard to write and i have a hard time of getting my thoughts out, that and i don't want anyone to steal it.
 
I just want to let it be knowed that this is really just the set up and a preview of the story.
If that is disappointing, i apologize.
But it is really hard to write and i have a hard time of getting my thoughts out, that and i don't want anyone to steal it.
Well, I wasn't joking on the last post or smthing like that, I really mean it and I appreciate your work ^^
 

DreadnoughtDT

God of Hyperdeath
Premium
Supporter 2014
Oooooh, this sounds awesome. Especially the Raptorians and Tyrans. (has a thing for dragons) XD
 

Eric

Great Demon King of Evil
EDIT: New updates to Set up made and new section Word Meanings added. (9/21/11)

EDIT: Fukuroukarasu/Hadrese concept art added. (9/22/11)

EDIT: New characters added. (9/24/11)

Oooooh, this sounds awesome. Especially the Raptorians and Tyrans. (has a thing for dragons) XD
Raptorians and Tyranians are an idea I have had for a while now.
Before I came up with this story, I had another story called The Legend of Ty. It was about a Tyranian (at that time Tyranians were actualy Tyranosaurus) named Ty (I later changed it to Tylo because of Ty The Tasmanian Tiger) and his fight against the evil god Geartron (Godzilla like character) who wants to take over the world and to cover it in shadow and his army of Raptors called Raptorians. Of course, Zinu is based loosley off of Tylo and Zephrese is loosley based off of Geartron. Though I do intend for Tylo to appear in my new story as the new version of a Tyranian. Also I would like to point out that Slothrians are based off of a race of the same name from my other story as well as an evil member of the race named Slothro who serves as the second main antagonist for my old story.
So I have borrowed some things from my previous story. I do however intend on also working further on my old story once I have the basic set up for this story complete. Basic set up being characters and locations.

P.S: I apologize for the late reply as well as the multiple double post (I'll make sure to only double post on here if there has been major edits made to it as long as that is okay).

EDIT: New characters and locations added. New preview also added. (1/14/12)
 

Eric

Great Demon King of Evil
Is that a fanfic? Shall I sent it to the fanfic section?
I'm not sure it counts as a fanfic considering the fact that it is my own characters (The characters that are not mine are from religions and mythologies).
Doesn't a fanfic usually have characters from other sources of media such as books and movies?
I know that they sometimes come with their own characters, but they still have other characters from other things.
If you wish to move it to the fanfic section, that is fine with me because the characters that are not mine could indeed make this into a fanfic.

wow......thats.....wow....looking forward to it actually
I'm glad that you are looking forward to it. ^_^
 

Tony_Redgrave

TimeLord Detective
Moderator
I'm not sure it counts as a fanfic considering the fact that it is my own characters (The characters that are not mine are from religions and mythologies).
Doesn't a fanfic usually have characters from other sources of media such as books and movies?
I know that they sometimes come with their own characters, but they still have other characters from other things.
If you wish to move it to the fanfic section, that is fine with me because the characters that are not mine could indeed make this into a fanfic.


I'm glad that you are looking forward to it. ^_^

Well originally the DMC Fanfiction section was only about that - DMC Fanfiction, but ultimately "evolved" into a place for everything made by the community, anything regarding art. So yeah if this is your story/characters etc, it still counts^^
 

Eric

Great Demon King of Evil
Well originally the DMC Fanfiction section was only about that - DMC Fanfiction, but ultimately "evolved" into a place for everything made by the community, anything regarding art. So yeah if this is your story/characters etc, it still counts^^
Oh, I see. Alright. Thanks. ^_^

EDIT: Information on races added. (1/15/12)
 

Angel

Is not rat, is hamster
Admin
Moderator
i don't want anyone to steal it.
Well technically you've copyrighted your work already by posting bits of it on here - each post is time and date stamped so if there were anyone naughty enough to try and steal your ideas, you can effectively prove you got in there first ;)
 

Eric

Great Demon King of Evil
I need some help with naming some characters and races.

The following characters and races need names:
Envy. (needs true name)
Extraterrestrial turtle race.
Gluttony. (needs true name)
Goddess of Earth/Goddess of Fire.
Goddess of Water/Goddess of Ice.
Goddess of Wind/Goddess of Thunder.
God of Light.
Greed. (needs true name)
Human-like cat race.
Lust. (needs true name)
Pride. (needs true name)
Sloth. (needs true name)
Werewolves.
Wrath. (needs true name)

I would be glad if some people could give me some names. I would prefer that there names meanings have something to do with their elements (if a god) or sin (if a sin).

I will also be editing a few things over the week and will post EDIT: on this post when something has been edited with the date as always.

Thank you very much and have a good day! ^_^

EDIT: Races added, pictures for Zenu/Zenu and Zephrese added and this post edited. (3/23/12)
 
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