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This is my effort to show people
how fanfiction is NOT done I am going to look at fanfiction and tell you guys how poorly these messes
got
day one Dante and Trish - my journey into the everliving h*ll that was fanfiction.net begins
all of these were actually pretty well written and kept
people were kept in character but it was the same thing with each ,dante acts seductive to bug trish and trish does the same to Dante and what really bugged me was the parts where it got out of hand and you can guess what's about to happen
Day 2 Nero and kyrie
some of these were prequels some sequels but all of them were cliche
"Nero I accept your arm "
"no kyrie it will hurt you "
"no it won't" *puts arm on necklace* " see"
"well if you say so "
the end
day three dante and lady/mary
out of all this so far this one drives me insane not because he is dmc2 Dante at points not because he impregnated her ( in multiple stories)
but because i finally find a decent story in this jumbled mess
"a passage of time " was 12 chapters where although it gets cornier and cornier and Dante is out of character at points we have a basic story Him falling in love her rejecting hi
and he loses his stylish Attitude but what I liked about this one was that part 1 was dmc3 from dantes perspective , though The rest of the stories drove me crazy
day I feared - yaoi
this was where things got out of hand I had a gun to
my head by the time I finished these I have nothing against gays but both pairings creeped me out one
was homosexual inbreeding ( Dante and Vergil) and the other was pedophillic (Dante and Nero) so that alone was creepy enough but when the get as descriptive as "he twisted his ____ ever so slowly" and "he moaned with pleasure as his _____ was being grabbed " that is where I cross the line
so please I have nothing against shippers but when you do it try to
keep people in character
how fanfiction is NOT done I am going to look at fanfiction and tell you guys how poorly these messes
got
day one Dante and Trish - my journey into the everliving h*ll that was fanfiction.net begins
all of these were actually pretty well written and kept
people were kept in character but it was the same thing with each ,dante acts seductive to bug trish and trish does the same to Dante and what really bugged me was the parts where it got out of hand and you can guess what's about to happen
Day 2 Nero and kyrie
some of these were prequels some sequels but all of them were cliche
"Nero I accept your arm "
"no kyrie it will hurt you "
"no it won't" *puts arm on necklace* " see"
"well if you say so "
the end
day three dante and lady/mary
out of all this so far this one drives me insane not because he is dmc2 Dante at points not because he impregnated her ( in multiple stories)
but because i finally find a decent story in this jumbled mess
"a passage of time " was 12 chapters where although it gets cornier and cornier and Dante is out of character at points we have a basic story Him falling in love her rejecting hi
and he loses his stylish Attitude but what I liked about this one was that part 1 was dmc3 from dantes perspective , though The rest of the stories drove me crazy
day I feared - yaoi
this was where things got out of hand I had a gun to
my head by the time I finished these I have nothing against gays but both pairings creeped me out one
was homosexual inbreeding ( Dante and Vergil) and the other was pedophillic (Dante and Nero) so that alone was creepy enough but when the get as descriptive as "he twisted his ____ ever so slowly" and "he moaned with pleasure as his _____ was being grabbed " that is where I cross the line
so please I have nothing against shippers but when you do it try to
keep people in character