Journey of a man....

[Crimson_Countess]

A world so carrupt by the very inhabitants that wander its plains, searching the depths of this pitiful planet for the meaning to their pathetic existence. One man, he alone knows the truth. That the wreched souls of this worthless world shall one day answer to their maker for the way they live. They will pay for their sins and be cleansed by the flames of eternal damnation. The pain and suffering he hath endured shall be worth the fight he refused to cease once her crimes against his soul are accounted for. Fore it was she alone who raised him. Watched him grow from a boy to a man, from a man into a ruthless warrior. Bent on showing her where her position is in his life. Nowhere... Not anymore...

 

[darkdeamon92/dmc3/]

hello any one there?.......do you want us to write the story??:blink:

 

[Crimson_Countess]

sorry about that folks, i was trying to post a poem. it wouldnt post. now i cant figure out how to delete it. i wrote a complete poem and once i clicked post it disappeared.....

 

[Crimson_Countess]

oh, there we go. sorry pplz. i didnt realize i accidentally made the text white. lol it was there the whole time.

 

[darkdeamon92/dmc3/]

nice i like it

 

[Crimson_Countess]

thanks. its a poem about the issues ive been facing recently with my gender. its one of the toughest roads ive had to travel, but i know in the end i can get through it if i try. idk if im going to keep the thread open for much longer or not. it depends on what others think about it, and wether they want to see more work from me. i might just make this like a thread for a collection of poems that are sort of like a journal about my gender issues. though, i would think first i need to wait and see if anyone has a problem with it, or if it may cause conflict.

 

[darkdeamon92/dmc3/]

i would definitely like to see more ^_^

 

[Laurence Barnes]

i second that that poem was deep i agree with DD

 

[lorddemolatron]

Nice thing. I should see more. Well and post mine again new FanFiction.

 

[Crimson_Countess]

wow, and here i thought for sure nobody would like my works. lol its not exactly the type of subject society accepts in this day and age. ok, if the mods and admins will allow the thread to go on, i will leave this as an ongoing journal style thread of my struggles with gender. glad to see so many of you like it.

 

[Crimson_Countess]

Once a revered goddess, praised by god and man alike. She has fallen into the shadows, a world in which she is lost amongst the darkness. Her heart and soul kept in bondage by her own fears. The goddess cries out to be seen or heard. Neither man nor god can save her, she cries out "i cant do this anymore, ive grown to weak to fight!" A fallen goddess, the shackles of pain and dispair her only companion. Will none of mankind ever aknowledge her as the goddess she once was? Will she ever be free of this prison that lies within? The goddess lies in sorrow, "shall i never be seen for who i am? Is being aknowledged as a male my punishment for losing my faith in the gods?"


this one is origionally titled a heart trapped in bondage. i am more then sure some of the more deep writers here will see why i chose such a title.