DMC: Rise of a New Hunter

[CrimsonTyger]

Introduction.

I was only twelve when it happened. My family was attacked and slayed by demon. I managed to get away. Not unharmed though. My arms and chest were completely covered in lacerations from the devils. While escaping a group of military specialists found me and gave me medical attention. They asked if I wanted revenge. Filled with anger and hate I nodded my head. Throughout my whole teenage life I was trained in the art of the devil hunter. After my training I became a key member in the demon slaying army. I am know a leader of a squad known as Project Delta. I wont rest till every demon is slain!

 

[Chaos Raiden]

Good intro...rep + for you...

 

[CrimsonTyger]

Part 1:

"Ok lock and load men!" Crimson shouted to the 3 other slayers in his squad. Each man valued for their gun and sword skills. "We have news saying an island has become heavy demon territory. Most people on the island are most likely dead. Still our job is to go to the island find any survivors and also eliminate as many demons as possible." At the same time all three men snapped a salute and yelled, "Yes Sir!" They pilled into their chopper and took off. Everyone was outfitted with special gear to help them on their mission. Dragon skin vests. Powerful enough to withstand grenade blasts. Ballistic bulletproof helmats with a special visor to pick up demonic aura. Katana blades for close range combat and bullets filled with syrum that attacks the nervouse systems of demons. They were ready to give them hell!

 

[CrimsonTyger]

Part 2

While riding in the chopper Crimson pulled out an old photo of him with his mother and little sister. Looking at that picture was all the motivation he needed to help him on his mission. "Sir, what kind of demons will we be dealing with?" One of the soldiers asked as he sighted his M16-A2's scope. Crimson replied, "Reports say the work of animal type demons." Animal types were the most hated in Project Delta. They are so fast and brutal. They had lost one of their men to a pack of demon wolves a few missions back. They still have the images of the man being torn apart by sharp fangs and claws burned into their skulls.

 

[CrimsonTyger]

Part 3:

The Chopper dropped the men off into the water just 40 meters from the island so their position would remain safe. All their electrical equipment was made waterproof so there would be no problem swimming with it. "Ok good luck!" The pilot yelled to the men over the radio. "When your done radio for pick up." The helicopter took off and left Project Delta to do what they do best. Crimson looked at his team and order them to follow. Slowly they began their swim to the island. Lord knows what could be waiting for them in the area. The water was unusually warm in that area for some reason that know one could figure out why. Crimson Had a gut feeling that it might be a bad reason. So he knew they needed to get out of the water soon.

 

[CrimsonTyger]

After the four got out of the water the brought all their gear online. "Holy ****." Pvt. Kraimer said as he looked through his visor. Everyone's visor picked up tons of demonic aura around the surrounding area. "Sir, I think this might be a suicide mission unless we get back up." Another soldier told Crimson. The Sergeant looked around scanning the aura's levels. "Don't worry." he said in a chuckle, "Its low level aura. I kill these types every day in practice." Their leader moved forward with his M4-A1 rifle up to his shoulder. Instinctivly the other three followed him.

 

[King Avallach]

Short bursts, eh.
That's the style I generally uti;ise as well, I like the idea of group/ squad based devil hunting. Just a little more consideration with your vocab is all I can say. Certain words e.g. "lacerations" seem more than a little incongruous, I sincerely believe that if you do this you will increase the verisimilitude of this fanfic making it a top-notch read.

 

[King Avallach]

Overdue but I've repped you up.

 

[Crimson Red Knight]

it's going pretty nice..keep up the good work

 

[CrimsonTyger]

Slowly they worked their way to their set destination. A village smack dab in the middle of the island. They had to see if there were any survivors around. But so far no normal signatures showed on their scanners. Which wasn't that much of a surprise that it didn't. Suddenly a loud howl echoed through the area and was followed by even more howls. "Make sure the saftey is off on ur guns." Crimson ordered as he new trouble was heading their way. "Remember also that your grenades and swords are only used as a last resort."

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Nice +rep man, keep it up