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Devil May Cry: The Dark One Returns

Angelo Credo

Kept you waiting, huh?
This is set approximately 10 years after the events of Fortuna, I won't go in to great detail, as it will just spoil it, I'll post the first chapter now and depending on if I get enough positive feedback, I'll continue to post the story, if I don't get enough, I shall just request the thread be locked.

Characters:

I suppose I should introduce one or two characters, these are subject to change, as the story is only currently is design phase, and I'm still not entirely sure about which characters I'll keep, and which I'll axe, so here it goes I guess.

Dante: (Not yet confirmed)

One of the sons of Sparda, the legendary Devil Hunter Dante is renowned for his cocky attitude and witty insults, he fears nothing and has a level of bravery none have seen before, he wields his trademark blade, Rebellion and of course, his twin handguns, Ebony and Ivory, little has been seen of Dante since the events of Fortuna, yet all we know is that the world needs a hero like him once more.

Vergil:

The other son of Sparda, this cool, calm and collected character is ruthless to the end, refusing to use any sort of Fire Arm, he compensates with the use of Summoned Swords, a currently latent ability which he will regain soon, he fought his way out of the demon world tooth and nail, and comes out of the ordeal weapon less and disoriented, all he knows is that he has a job to do, yet what this job may be, is still a mystery even to him.

Nero:

A mysterious young man, not much is known about his past, and don't expect him to disclose anything about it either, he defeated Sanctus and took down The Saviour during the events of Fortuna a good 10 years back, since then he took command of the Order of the Sword and returned it to it's former glory, his skill with the sword has grown ever stronger, charged to care for the Yamato in Dante's absence, perhaps soon...It's true owner will return for it.



Draxus:

The blacksmith of the Order of the Sword, a hardworking and kindly old man, he treats Nero like his own son and is always bailing him out of trouble.

Gabriel: (Name credited to Chaos Master.)

A fiery young man with a mouth as smart as Dante's, and recently a friend of Nero's, they met not long after the events of Fortuna, his skill with the sword is unmatched in Fortuna, with the exception of Nero, he possesses no demonic powers, yet compensates with a significant deal of self earned strength, able to cleave through the hardest steel as if it was butter.


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Prologue:

The world cried for a hero, as the demon army advanced onward, leaving nothing but destruction in their wake, every man, woman and child prayed for a hero…You see, after the events at Fortuna, Dante entrusted his brother’s sword, The Yamato, to a young warrior known as Nero, since then, none have seen the hail of bullets or the glint of Dante’s sword.

And Nero…Well, 10 years on, he remains a skilled warrior, fighting the unending hordes in adamant defence of his beliefs, his city, and those he loved, but it is not enough, Nero has been unable to hold them back on his own, many raids have been attempted upon demonic encampments, very few have yielded any success of note, and the storm of demons are dwindling the supplies of the Order of the Sword.

Nero took command of the Order, leading them in the defence of the continent, yet many casualties have been suffered, many lives lost in the unending struggle against this new force.

Portals have been located and sealed off, making life a little easier for the Order, yet it seems when one demon dies, two more appear to take their fallen comrade’s place, things seem bleak for the world, things seem hopeless for all humanity as we know it…
 

Angelo Credo

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I'll post chapter 1 now and hope for some feedback by the time I return tommorow.

Chapter 1: The return of the Dark Slayer.
Regain your composure and find a way out of the forest.

Far off from Fortuna, in the middle of a dense forest, lies a seemingly lifeless corpse with little clothing other than black trousers and a tattered black shirt, an empty blade sheath adorns his waist.

The man begins to stir, regaining consciousness, he pulls himself up and throws back his long, white hair, he dusts himself off.

“If anything…I’d have thought the underworld would have taken it’s toll on my soul rather than my clothing…”

The man uttered, looking down as his torn and bloodied shirt.

Unarmed and confused, this man’s eyes darted from left to right, scanning his surroundings, as if everything made no sense to him.

“Where…Am I?”

He spoke once more, bruises dotted all over his body made it look as if it was painful for him to even speak, he heard a rustle in the bushes nearby and swiftly spun round, he walked towards the bushes, alert of anything that might dare to strike him.

An envelope had been left at the bottom of the bush, the man’s name written on the front of it in a style that resembled something close to Calligraphy, he picked it up and opened the envelope, a small letter was contained inside, it read…

“Vergil, it’s nice to see you’re back with us, I can’t tell you much, but you’ve been returned to us for a reason, you must reclaim your sword as soon as possible, without it…You’re no use to us, I left a little something behind to help you out, it’s not much, but it’s a start, good luck.”

Hidden inside the bush was a well crafted, pure white long sword, he removed it from it’s resting place and sheathed it.

“At least it’s a start…”

Vergil said, looking over his new weapon, he glanced over the general area, noticing a nearby bridge, smoke rose from the ground, small buildings dotted around, it looks like an encampment.

“Convenient…Looks as if things are starting to go my way for once.”

~To be continued~
 

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BRILLIANT man :) very nicely written, loved the prologue +rep
 

Angelo Credo

Kept you waiting, huh?
:D Thank you very much, I shall post up the second chapter when I'm a little less busy, thanks for the rep as well. ^_^
 

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^ No probs. Just keep this awesome story up and you'll get a bigger view soon :)

Plus, if you EVER need help on your fic, then I will help you out in Pm's.
 

Angelo Credo

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Awesome, nice to know I can ask for some help if I ever suffer a little writers block, second chapter will be up ASAP.
 

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Angelo Credo;87311 said:
Awesome, nice to know I can ask for some help if I ever suffer a little writers block, second chapter will be up ASAP.

^ well, I'm always here for peeps :) you ever hit a little snag then you can count on me to help :)
 

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I am very intrigued on Vergil's sudden return,and Reno.:) Rep+ for great suspense too.

p.s - If i am you,I would change Reno's name to something else,if possible.But it is your fiction,so I am merely suggesting it.:)
 

Angelo Credo

Kept you waiting, huh?
Vergil's return is pretty much the base of the story, and Reno...Well, I'm not sure on the character name myself, I was a little tired when creating some of this, and like I said, everything is subject to change, so I probably will end up changing it.

Thanks for the feedback though, very much appreciated, almost finished with Chapter 2 now.
 

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^ All I can say is this. If somebody criticises something in your story, such as names or locations :) try asking the readers what name would be appropriate. I find this helps, as you know in the end that your readers are going to like the name. However, this is just a suggestion from me, and as it is your story feel free to go about it as you wish :)

Oh, and I can't wait for the second chapter man :) nice story so far, keep it up man.
 

Angelo Credo

Kept you waiting, huh?
Thanks Lord of Darkness, I'll bear that in mind.
Chapter 2.

Chapter 2: The Knights of the Order.
Retrieve your sword and rally your soldiers.

“My lord!”

A soldier shouted, running after Nero, the new leader of the Order of the Sword.

“What is it soldier?”

Nero replied, turning round to face this worn out and tired grunt.

“Our scouts have returned, they bring word of a nearby demon encampment…What do you want done?”


“I think you should know that, rally my elites, we purge the camp!”

“Yes my lord!”

The soldier ran off, back the way he came, Nero continued on his path, Nero had recently damaged his sword, the Red Queen and it was currently under repairs, although recently finished, Nero was on his way to collect it and be reunited with his blade.

“I hear you are finished with my blade Draxus.”

“I am my lord, would you care to give her a swing? I’m sure you’ll find the fixings and updates to your liking.”
The blacksmith replied, a grin on his face, admiring his own handiwork.

“I’m sure I shall Draxus, your work has never let me down before.”

Nero walked outside the shop, into the training grounds behind the building and began to test the new modifications, he swung the blade, it cut through the air as gracefully as a bird and the chime that resonated from it was a thing of beauty, with such grace and finesse, Nero cleaved clean through the wooden training dummy, he swung the sword round once more and revved it, propellant sprayed down the blade, and once it came into contact with the dummy, it was engulfed in searing flames.

Draxus stepped out into the training ground.

“I see you are pleased with my work then my lord?”

“Yes…Yes very much so, you’ve made it so streamlined, so graceful, I never thought this old thing could get any better, you never cease to amaze me old friend, thank you for working on the old girl, now if you don’t mind, I must be off, we’ve received word of a nearby demon camp, and we intend to remove it.”

Nero darted off, running along the town streets as fast as he could to meet up with his regiment, he hoped they had not already left without him.

“My lord Nero, you’re just in time, the troops are rallied and we are ready to move out on your orders.”

“Very good, soldiers! With me!”

A synchronised shout came from the platoon.

“Sir, yes sir!”

The battalion marched onwards, onwards to their objective, for better…Or for worse.
 

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BRILLIANT -looks gobsmacked- you write so fluently, so graceful :) man, I have something to ask of you in the near future I believe .lol. PM me if you wish to find out what my proposal is.

All I can say is this. I love the blacksmith Draxus, however, could he possibly be a gunsmith also? and perhaps have/possess great technology to increase the soldiers attacks and armour :) just an idea.
 

Angelo Credo

Kept you waiting, huh?
Haha, thanks guys, sorry about the long reply, I'm currently doing revision while writing, and I'll PM you shortly LoD.
 

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^ No probs man :) also, what did you think of my idea for Draxus?
 

Angelo Credo

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Certainly something I will consider, I think it would work, considering Nero's use of the Blue Rose...You star, you've just given me a great idea for Draxus in relation to Vergil.
 

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^ Me? A star? How very kind +rep :)

Like I have already pointed out, I am only happy to help. Think of me as a mechanoid that finds happiness from helping and serving .lol.
 

Angelo Credo

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Yes you sir, a star, the idea will be implemented in Chapter 5, most likely, Chapter 3 and 4 are already in the works. ^_^
 

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^ If I am a star, then you are a whole constellation my good man :) I look forward to the coming chapters :)
 
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