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INDEX
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Here is the web serial: http://www.drewhayesnovels.com/superpowereds
Please tell me about any typos or grammar mistakes you find, I need all the help I can get improving my writing.
INDEX
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
CHAPTER 1
The metro train rumbled irregularly as it made it's way toward Western Brooklyn, the graffiti ridden stone walls flashing by as it shot past at blurring speeds. Most of the people seated in the moderately comfortable plastic benches of the locomotive were either looking at their phones, talking, or trying to catch some sleep despite the constant buzz of noise.
The only real oddity in the compartment being a man with two binders and three note books floating around him in a slow orbit, stopping occasionally and opening when he wanted to read from one of them. Apart from a few furtive glances when he initial stepped on from the last stop he was largely ignored, the man was obviously a Super and one that didn't hide it, the people on train were apparently content to just let him mind his own business while he minded his.
But Shane DeSoto kept his eye on the weathered looking man, he'd originally been reading up on the Hero teams in the area and recent crimes that required Hero intervention when the man stepped onto the train with his lose orbit of office supplies. The guy had short dark hair, graying at the tips, and was wearing a tan business suit, the skin of his head and hands an almost boring dark beige. Shane usually wouldn't have payed such a man this much attention, but this was a rather inconvenient time for a Super like him to be nearby, after all he couldn't have an Advanced Mind over hear that he was going to the base of one of the most famous hero teams, Pristine Strikers.
It would be rather embarrassing to blow his secret identity before his internship had even started.
Thankfully the HCP trained a student's mind as well as their body and powers, learning to martial your thoughts against telepathy was one of the first skills they had to learn before graduating, so while the man's presence wasn't ideal, it didn't merit any real worry on his part. But just to be on the safe side of things he decide to take his attention off the man and put away his phone to get his mind off hero related topics. Shane decided it would be best to just focus on his power for the rest of the trip, a little more training never hurt after all, he leaned back and titled his head down with his eyes half closed, ensuring that people wouldn't notice when the sclera of his eyes turned pitch-black. He could feel his senses warp as he filled every shadow in the compartment with life and his presence, he could never explain exactly how this felt to others, but it was closets in comparison to touch.
With a part of himself in the shadows, and his senses warped around them, he could now "feel" the people, objects, furniture, and even the very walls of the compartment of the train; this sense wasn't exactly accurate but it did a sort of 360 field of awareness and saved from a sneak attack on more than one occasion.
After a few minutes of flexing his awareness and control he heard the call for his station and felt the slow stop of the train, suddenly becoming more aware of the shadows on the outside also giving him a heads up.
He turned off his power and checked his pockets before picking up his mini-duffel bag and heading out of the sliding doors. He trekked his way through the crow and back up above ground and started off at a brisk walk toward his destination with twenty minutes to spare, the Red Hook neighborhood. The brisk Fall wind howling and pushing against his windbreaker as his laced boots crunched over the fallen leaves were his only company as he half-jogged toward the ominous looking structure only a few blocks away.
Like most bases the Pristine Strikers' had originally been a large abandoned factory near the edge of the town they protected. The base was a steel affair, most likely the reinforced kind, sitting at four stories tall and with windows situated evenly but sparsely on each floor, to be honest it would've looked bland if not for the purple and violet light of the sunset and cloudy weather giving it a sort of brooding quasi-medieval presence to it. The entrance was a steel double door with with a rounded marble staircase leading up to it, but Shane wouldn't be going there.
He couldn't very well just walk into the base, even with the security they probably had, someone walking into a base and never coming back out would be a rather obvious sign to the more astute villains and criminals. The text he'd gotten in the morning had very specific details about where to go and how much he could bring; so after one last look towards what might be his new home he toke a left turn down towards the laundry mat that should be exactly a block away and close to closing time. The place had a surprisingly modern look to it, the neon sign up against the front not lit up yet, and the front window had an almost sparkling sheen to it.
A small middle aged woman beckons him in from behind a chrome green counter, obviously having expected him. The door opens with a light bell tone and she quickly hops forward and leads him by the hand into the back room.
"You're awfully early, young man. But no matter, I quite like my employees to be punctual.", she says with a surprisingly cheerful and accented voice, her short stature and chubby frame pulling him along with surprising strength. The woman opened the door and lead him into a rather bare bones looking office with grey concrete walls, and a dirty tiled floor,; the other exit being a emergency-exit door towards the back.
There was a woman with cocoa colored skin that was sitting at a cluttered desk in the center, drinking what looked like tea. "My husband can interview you hear while I handle the register, deary.", and with that she gave Shane pat on the back before heading back out.
Turning back towards the woman in the suit Shane found that she had already gotten to her feet, the empty mug left on top of the desk, she smoothed out the wrinkles in her suit before addressing him, "Why do you serious types always have to get here so early?", she pushed her braided hair back a little before stepping forward with a hand outstretched. "The name's Maria Zaria, I gotta say it's nice to meet the grandson of the first official Super-Hero."
He didn't bother giving his name in return, she obviously already knew about him and his family, he'd gotten used to DVA agents knowing him buy name despite never having met him before.
"I can't help it ma'am, four years in the HCP will do that to you.", Shane replied with a wide smile as he shook her hand before stepping back and looking around the small room. "So is this where every intern goes to get inside the base?", he asked absentmindedly.
The tall woman gave short snort before ruffling his short blonde hair, currently styled as a crew-cut, "Of course not, kid. We've got more than a few stores for several blocks around that we picked at random for each of you.", before he could responded or back away from the sudden contact she closed her eye in obvious concentration as the world warped around them.
"Now get ready, I'm fast, but my power doesn't exactly make for the smoothest ride."
The metro train rumbled irregularly as it made it's way toward Western Brooklyn, the graffiti ridden stone walls flashing by as it shot past at blurring speeds. Most of the people seated in the moderately comfortable plastic benches of the locomotive were either looking at their phones, talking, or trying to catch some sleep despite the constant buzz of noise.
The only real oddity in the compartment being a man with two binders and three note books floating around him in a slow orbit, stopping occasionally and opening when he wanted to read from one of them. Apart from a few furtive glances when he initial stepped on from the last stop he was largely ignored, the man was obviously a Super and one that didn't hide it, the people on train were apparently content to just let him mind his own business while he minded his.
But Shane DeSoto kept his eye on the weathered looking man, he'd originally been reading up on the Hero teams in the area and recent crimes that required Hero intervention when the man stepped onto the train with his lose orbit of office supplies. The guy had short dark hair, graying at the tips, and was wearing a tan business suit, the skin of his head and hands an almost boring dark beige. Shane usually wouldn't have payed such a man this much attention, but this was a rather inconvenient time for a Super like him to be nearby, after all he couldn't have an Advanced Mind over hear that he was going to the base of one of the most famous hero teams, Pristine Strikers.
It would be rather embarrassing to blow his secret identity before his internship had even started.
Thankfully the HCP trained a student's mind as well as their body and powers, learning to martial your thoughts against telepathy was one of the first skills they had to learn before graduating, so while the man's presence wasn't ideal, it didn't merit any real worry on his part. But just to be on the safe side of things he decide to take his attention off the man and put away his phone to get his mind off hero related topics. Shane decided it would be best to just focus on his power for the rest of the trip, a little more training never hurt after all, he leaned back and titled his head down with his eyes half closed, ensuring that people wouldn't notice when the sclera of his eyes turned pitch-black. He could feel his senses warp as he filled every shadow in the compartment with life and his presence, he could never explain exactly how this felt to others, but it was closets in comparison to touch.
With a part of himself in the shadows, and his senses warped around them, he could now "feel" the people, objects, furniture, and even the very walls of the compartment of the train; this sense wasn't exactly accurate but it did a sort of 360 field of awareness and saved from a sneak attack on more than one occasion.
After a few minutes of flexing his awareness and control he heard the call for his station and felt the slow stop of the train, suddenly becoming more aware of the shadows on the outside also giving him a heads up.
He turned off his power and checked his pockets before picking up his mini-duffel bag and heading out of the sliding doors. He trekked his way through the crow and back up above ground and started off at a brisk walk toward his destination with twenty minutes to spare, the Red Hook neighborhood. The brisk Fall wind howling and pushing against his windbreaker as his laced boots crunched over the fallen leaves were his only company as he half-jogged toward the ominous looking structure only a few blocks away.
Like most bases the Pristine Strikers' had originally been a large abandoned factory near the edge of the town they protected. The base was a steel affair, most likely the reinforced kind, sitting at four stories tall and with windows situated evenly but sparsely on each floor, to be honest it would've looked bland if not for the purple and violet light of the sunset and cloudy weather giving it a sort of brooding quasi-medieval presence to it. The entrance was a steel double door with with a rounded marble staircase leading up to it, but Shane wouldn't be going there.
He couldn't very well just walk into the base, even with the security they probably had, someone walking into a base and never coming back out would be a rather obvious sign to the more astute villains and criminals. The text he'd gotten in the morning had very specific details about where to go and how much he could bring; so after one last look towards what might be his new home he toke a left turn down towards the laundry mat that should be exactly a block away and close to closing time. The place had a surprisingly modern look to it, the neon sign up against the front not lit up yet, and the front window had an almost sparkling sheen to it.
A small middle aged woman beckons him in from behind a chrome green counter, obviously having expected him. The door opens with a light bell tone and she quickly hops forward and leads him by the hand into the back room.
"You're awfully early, young man. But no matter, I quite like my employees to be punctual.", she says with a surprisingly cheerful and accented voice, her short stature and chubby frame pulling him along with surprising strength. The woman opened the door and lead him into a rather bare bones looking office with grey concrete walls, and a dirty tiled floor,; the other exit being a emergency-exit door towards the back.
There was a woman with cocoa colored skin that was sitting at a cluttered desk in the center, drinking what looked like tea. "My husband can interview you hear while I handle the register, deary.", and with that she gave Shane pat on the back before heading back out.
Turning back towards the woman in the suit Shane found that she had already gotten to her feet, the empty mug left on top of the desk, she smoothed out the wrinkles in her suit before addressing him, "Why do you serious types always have to get here so early?", she pushed her braided hair back a little before stepping forward with a hand outstretched. "The name's Maria Zaria, I gotta say it's nice to meet the grandson of the first official Super-Hero."
He didn't bother giving his name in return, she obviously already knew about him and his family, he'd gotten used to DVA agents knowing him buy name despite never having met him before.
"I can't help it ma'am, four years in the HCP will do that to you.", Shane replied with a wide smile as he shook her hand before stepping back and looking around the small room. "So is this where every intern goes to get inside the base?", he asked absentmindedly.
The tall woman gave short snort before ruffling his short blonde hair, currently styled as a crew-cut, "Of course not, kid. We've got more than a few stores for several blocks around that we picked at random for each of you.", before he could responded or back away from the sudden contact she closed her eye in obvious concentration as the world warped around them.
"Now get ready, I'm fast, but my power doesn't exactly make for the smoothest ride."
Here is the web serial: http://www.drewhayesnovels.com/superpowereds
Please tell me about any typos or grammar mistakes you find, I need all the help I can get improving my writing.
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