A little Poetry

[Cheerful Friend]

okay, now i know that i am not the only writer on this forum. and i thought that it would be fun if we could share some of the poems or songs that we (Being anyone that reads this and wants to post back) have written.

if you read a poem or a song that you do not like, or isn't something that you personally care for, please do not post mean or rude remarks. it's hard to share poetry and songs sometimes, and the people who post their creative writings should not be critisized negatively for example "you suck" or "That was just stupid". Thank you in advance for following that simple rule.

ok since i wrote this thread i should be the first one to share what i wrote

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everyday you become Different
i always say that our journey ends now but i found that it has just started
inside of you a life filled with darkness
it scares me and the people's eyes says
why are you with him?
i tell them
Loyalty and my rights for my friendship
our Friendships gives me new feeling and new faith
i will tell you my story
i am a person who lives in a dark world
i try to live and i fight to live
until the day i see new light
until that day i will keep fighting as a Brave horseman holding on in principle and value
with my eyes i see him as a simple person
but inside him there is a lot of complicated and dark
and The tale continues and the obscurity continues


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[Enigmatic_soldier]

before anyone says anything about my poems.can i(we)post dark poetry?

 

[Cheerful Friend]

sure you can

 

[Enigmatic_soldier]

finally someone smart and fair.i warn you


A little bit of suicide a day keeps the doctor away
A little bit of suicide a week keeps the nightmares at bay
A little bit of suicide a month keeps my friends worrying
A little bit of suicide a year keeps my heart still beating
A little bit of suicide every season keeps me filled with hate
A little bit of suicide every decade keeps society awake
A little bit of suicide every generation keeps the kids in graves
A little bit of suicide every turn of the century keeps the bright minds saved
A little bit of suicide every millennium makes the history books more interesting
A little bit of suicide every dawn of creation makes the world worth saving
A little bit of suicide every lifetime makes our lives so much more loved
There is something inside of us all
Its not anger, passion, hope, or just cause
Theres a little bit of suicide in us all

A little bit of suicide makes me who I am today...

 

[Kite]

wow....U guys are good that second 1 was a little dark ----- But i still like it nonetheless NICE JOB!
well anyways-- i did this for a friend of mine---it's a song i hope u guys like it!

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I always thought that you and i would be together
forever....

When I saw your sad eyes, it made cry
the thought of losing you made me cry even more

Even though I was laughing by your side
you still don't yet know that I love you
realize these feelings that I can't find words for...

I stood still waiting
searching for you, my one and only
even though my love for you is waiting impatiently
people still live on holding one another

That day i thought that if i have to wait impatiently still
i for sure won't ever fall in love again
and now I can't sleep at night because I'm so lonely
just tell me what your true feelings are..

Even though I was laughing by your side
you still don't yet know that I love you
realize these feelings that I can't find words for...

I stood still waiting
searching for you, my one and only
even though my love for you is waiting impatiently
people still live on holding one another

Waiting impatiently wasn't all i have
Now we're looking at the future together
all because there was still hope

and there u have it!

 

[Enigmatic_soldier]

If tonight I die,

Who will cry?

Strangers with their feigned interest,

While those I love have turned away.

And if my best isn't good enough,

What more can I give?

Go ahead--walk away.

Just leave me here alone.

And if tonight I die,

Who will cry?

All my strength is drained,

With nothing left to give.

Drowning in the depths of sorrow,

No tears left to cry.

A silent voice and distant eyes

That no one hears or sees.

And if tonight I die,

Who will cry?

 

[Kite]

wow^^^^^ +rep seriously,
that was just amazing.....

 

[Enigmatic_soldier]

To be like me

To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like

You might think I'm happy but I'm not gonna be okay

 

[Cheerful Friend]

wow these are really amazing

i am a solder who borned to fight
i have entered rhe war when i was six
this war won't end untill i die
i fought for a lot of reasons
and i know that i have a lot of reasons
but i don't know what thay are
i fight a lot of people
myself, my enamies
my frinds who don't care
about the ones whom sacrifise there life to help them​

 

[Enigmatic_soldier]

all the time i feel like crying
all the time i feel like dying
all the time i feel like cutting
all the time i feel like escaping
all the time i feel like i will never be happy


why do i suffer
why am i miserable
why should i keep living
why does no one understands me
why is it that im not happy
why do i feel dead inside
Its because ill never feel happy

 

[King Avallach]

I've enjoyed reading these. Here's one of my newer ones.

The Siren's Tragedy

This time she thought she would die,
Wallowing in her loneliness,
Cruel fate had not relented,
Not a soul missed or sought her.

Standing with a tear in her eye,
There in her immaculate dress,
She was contented,
To stand, staring into the water...

 

[Enigmatic_soldier]

The most heartbreaking sadness of all. How depressed and alone must a person feel to contemplate taking this drastic step. When a person feels that he has lost all control of his life, he may contemplate suicide. It is often a cry for help, the only way to make the world take them seriously

 

[Trish67]

one verse of a song i wrote

I call to the darkness inside my heart to find my light.
My light, my love, my soul-mate
where are you my love?
I need you here my love.
I need you. I need your love.
Your love to comfort me.

 

[LordOfDarkness]

Wow, seriously nice stuff so far guys.

Just something I wrote a few minutes ago.

It’s hard to show how much I care,
As I am here and you are there.
And it feels that we’re so far apart,
Yet you are here, inside my heart.

And my heart can feel the distance,
But I’m still here for you.
And my mind can feel the distance,
But I’m still here for you.
And my eyes wish to see into the distance,
But I’m still here for you.

I’d rather be right there, by your side,
For the times you’ve laughed, for the times you’ve cried.
Just so you know that someone cares,
And that person would always be standing there.

And life may not always go our way,
But if I still have you, then it will be okay.
I just need to know if you feel the same,
And if you don’t, I won’t feel any pain.

Just know that I love you so,
That I’m able to let you go.
Whatever makes it best for you,
I am willing to see through.

And my heart can feel the distance,
But I’m still here for you.
And my mind can feel the distance,
But I’m still here for you.
And my eyes wish to see into the distance,
But I’m still here for you.

 

[Enigmatic_soldier]

this is not a poem it comes from my heart

I feel like theres nothing good inside me anymore...everyone hates people say bad things about me ...they just don't know how does it feel to be alone,to be left out in the dark,to be kicked and insulted when your down...i honestly feel sometimes that it isn't worth it...living isn't worth it.....sometimes i just want to scream,cry,cut my self or even try to kill my self..maybe im all empty inside me maybe im not worth anything..but one thing that im sure of is that as long as i keep living i will just be miserable...i can't keep on pretending that i can laugh that im happy that i can smile..when is not true.when i know that deep down inside i can't stand the pain anymore

 

[aka958]

does Loveless counts? just like it

 

[dante devil]

every day i see the people
every day i live the people
ever day i use the people
but if only some days i could be the people



my freinds and i we live
my freinds and i we laugh
my freinds and i we dance
my freinds and i we stay
my freinds and i we die

 

[King Avallach]

Harvest moon

See the pollen carried through air,
The fresh cut grass,
You feel dizzy,
falling asleep under the vast tree's shadow.

Dreaming of how a second can last,
From now until the end of days,
The warm summer breeze,
Dancing through your hair and the trees.

The panoply greens,
Doused in light,
Comforted by the sun,
Stretching out beneath the envious sky.

Dreaming of how a second can last,
From now until the end of days,
The warm summer breeze,
Dancing through your hair and the trees.

Then the night falls,
The net of stars,
The harvest moon,
As your dreams bleed into one.

 

[Cheerful Friend]

WOW that is amazing.

here is something i just wrote

it so dark
the sky above me
the rainy clouds covered everything
i have forgotten what the moon looks like
it is raining now
the same as yestarday
the same as the day before
when will it stop
when will i see the moon again
nobody knows​

 

[King Avallach]

Freedom

The rows of silver birch pass by,
Walking along the riverside,
As the water, blue, shimmers,
A feigned silver reflected from a setting sun.

A deep whistle blows through the grass,
The stillness broken,
Myriad notions of incessant joy,
As the dank smell of post-rain evergreen.

Recalling the tarlatan halls,
The macabre feel of indoors,
Amidst the garlands of fruit,
The freedom sought has been squandered.